Broken Wings

Broken Wings

A Poem by beth.the.dancer
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It's a short poem (song, really) about a dying girl.

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Broken wings
[Chorus]
The girl with the broken wings
Stands up high and sings
Smiling for the last moments
The moments all leading to this one
The girl with the broken wings
Stands up high and sings
[Verse 1]
Nine months to live
Nine months to forgive
Broken hearted, broken wings
Can’t wait to see what tomorrow brings
Every minute is a minute lost
This is what not living cost
[Verse 2]
Scarred, forgotten, hated
Is the life that you created –?
Where’d it all go wrong?
You shoulda stayed strong
So give up your game
Because you’re the one to blame
[Chorus]
The girl with the broken wings
Stands up high and sings
Smiling for the last moments
The moments all leading to this one
The girl with the broken wings
Stands up high and sings
[Verse 3]
You’re trying
You’re trying
You’re lying
You’re lying
You’re dying
You’re dying
[Chorus]
The girl with the broken wings
Stands up high and sings
Smiling for the last moments
The moments all leading to this one
The girl with the broken wings
Stands up high and sings

© 2009 beth.the.dancer


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this is really awesome. the rhythm is good for a song. well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I hope this is a song because that's what it looks like to me. Anyway, if it is i hope that it makes it way to the radio someday. Well Done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


deeply dark and very moving . i hope the pain subsides and the healing process takes effect very soon .

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 17, 2009

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beth.the.dancer
beth.the.dancer

london, United Kingdom



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I'm 18, and I live in London. I'm studying fashion. I love writing, also (duh). My name is Beth. xxx more..

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