Caught

just a poem i wrote for my ex

caught in a lie,

a cheat,

a relationship,

unfaithful,

whats another word?

caght in a moment,

a moment of sadness,

a moment of tears,

caught in the wrong moment,

caught in drama

caught in lust,

caught in confussion,

caught......

not in love

 

Author's Note

please ignore where the letters did not get put my keyboard is acting up

Reviews

[Staci Brown]

i love how you made this poem work, like the ledges of a waterfall, flowing downward till you come to the bottom or conclusion :D nicely expressed

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[FrikinFrancesca]

Wow, I can really feel the emotion from this. It maybe short but wow. >w< It goes along nice and smooth!

Fabulous!

[Btw, Thanks for the review!]

[Jessica Fox]

This was a short but fast little poem and I liked the flow of it, great imagery and the flow you could not even see the mistakes with the letters.

[Sarah]

i know how u feel...i had almost the same experice last week...

and its so hard to understand....
im still trying to.

[Vesa Lee]

Keyboards are evil.*snicker* But seriously, well done. I really enjoy the flow of this one, very natualy. Please share more.

[Fear Corrupts!]

hmm...Good write.

[John Stussy]

wow... this is a good poem, you let your anger out well. the last two lines are a really strong ending to this. good job.