love

love

A Poem by Bre
"

for my ex gf...... everything in my life can fall apart because when i look a her it feels lke everything is ok it feels so right but then again it feels so wrong because i aint supposed to like girls like her

"

 

i see her every day,

i love when i see her,

but i wonder.....

do i see her as the girl that broke my heart?

or as the girl that i am head over heals for?

either way i put it,

i cant stop thinking about her,

she feels the same way......

the only problem is......

well.... she dont feel the same way for me,

she feels it for some other girl,

i love her,

she loves the other girl......

she knows i love her,

but she still loves that other girl......

i cant sleep,

i cant eat,

the only time i do sleep is when i cant stop crying at night....

why must i feel all this love for this one girl and not feel any love back?

what must i do to show her that i really do care?

i love her and i cant live with out her.....

i dont wanna have to try!!! =[

© 2008 Bre


Author's Note

Bre
please tell me wat you really think

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Bre
god i love this poem every time i read it, it makes me think of the good times i had with her and the bad hmm wonder why oh that might be because i wrote it lol oh well so come on ppl hit me up with review on this amazing poem and i will do the same to you ppl out there much love

BRE NUMBER ONE LESBIAN ON THIS WEBSITE PSH YEA YOU BETTER BELIEVE IT IS TRUE

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

definitely a tough situation when a breakup is still fresh and you have to see the ex lover day in and day out, especially when they've already moved on... you really need to get pissed hon! this girl just moved on so quickly after you... how can you justify that? don't feel sad and hurt, feel angry! this girl is so not worth all your pain or all the time you're spending crying over her. there's some other girl out there just waiting to meet you that deserves all this energy and love inside of you :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

Posted 15 Years Ago


It makes me so sad she broke your heart. :( *comforts you* Hopefully everything turns out... However you want it to. I loved it though!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ive beeen there done that.
and it sucks so bad.
it will get easier, i promise.
your gunna find the one that makes you sing.
and you'll forget all bout her.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow...that is so rough honey. I went through that once but somehow it all turned out alright in the end. i do hope that things work out for you though, this is an amazing piece of are you got here.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rawr! How dare she break your heart. -Tapes heart back together!!-
It is sad. ;_; You love her so much it jumps off the page. A.M.A.Z.I.N.G FIGHT FOR HER LOVE. You are a great writer! You really are.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Bre
god i love this poem every time i read it, it makes me think of the good times i had with her and the bad hmm wonder why oh that might be because i wrote it lol oh well so come on ppl hit me up with review on this amazing poem and i will do the same to you ppl out there much love

BRE NUMBER ONE LESBIAN ON THIS WEBSITE PSH YEA YOU BETTER BELIEVE IT IS TRUE

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

285 Views
6 Reviews
Rating
Added on July 18, 2008

Author

Bre
Bre

in her pants lol jk i am in my room, TX



About
more..

Writing
lost forever lost forever

A Poem by Bre


i'm over you i'm over you

A Poem by Bre


that day that day

A Poem by Bre



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Caught Caught

A Poem by Bre


days go by days go by

A Poem by Bre


that girl that girl

A Poem by Bre