that girl

that girl

A Poem by Bre
"

i'm just making it up as i go lol

"

 

 

she is the girl that sits in the back of the classroom with her notebook open all the time,

you stare at her,,

just wonderin....

what is she writing?

you look at her as she closes her book of lies,

and starts to cry,

you walk over to her....

she dont know what to say

you try to hold her but she says no

she gets up and leaves the room you fallow after

she says no

you sit back down

and go to her book

you start to read the book of lies,

aand with your eyes you see something you never thought would ever be seen,

she had a huge crush on you....

you fallow her again,

you ask her whats wrong.....

she says nothing...

you kiss her....

she looks at you and wonders why,

then you say

your the girl i have been looking for

© 2008 Bre


Author's Note

Bre
yes it is gay but oh well lol sew me

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awwwwwwwwww sooooo cute :) i love it!!! you spelled "fallow" wrong it's follow... but i still liked it :) it's not gay unless you mean homosexual :P in this case it would be lesbian but i like it :) it's soo cute i wish a girl would do that to me... :P (i'm bi here so i liked it) lol

Posted 15 Years Ago


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thats sweet mami i like it

Posted 15 Years Ago


very sweet and gentle. nice happy ending too :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

Posted 15 Years Ago


very nicely done =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it. its sweet:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol omg its yay

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awww!!
god damn i love that!!
hahahahaha moreeeeeeeeeeee

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

-Reviewing because is the most awesome new friend ever.-
It is pretty, Yay for ending up together with the right person. You can tell it comes from the heart. ^^

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 18, 2008

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Bre

in her pants lol jk i am in my room, TX



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