diary of a broken heart

just a poem i wrote after my girl dumped me the other day

one day one night,

same drama,

same fights,

i love you.....

a word used a lot,

but what is the true meaning?

is it used just to make conversation?

just to prove something?

or do you mean it when you say it?

as i sit down and write this in my diary,

diary of my broken heart,

we lasted so long.....

so long for nothing,

you are giving it all up....

you should have listened to your friends,

they told you about me.....

you didnt listen,

in the end yes this is all my fault.....

i do admit that,

just read my diary and you will understand,

this aint a broken heart poem.....

it is a diary.....

a diary of a broken heart

Author's Note

tell me what you think

Reviews

[Day]

i just wanna forget about the past and focus on the future. i love you baby

[a]

Quite pale and not very enjoyable, it is asking for more careful attention from the author.
It's impossible to feel that one's heart has been broken, there isn't enough emotionality, it seems that you have kept a lot inside of you. Let in run wild, free and angry, let the words be aggressive if necessary. The word set "broken heart" repeats to often, it becomes overused as the end is growing nearer, but the question still stay unanswered. Nothing much has been said about the means of this broken heart, why, what you actually think, what was she.he like. Maybe you could give a small hint on the other half that was involved in creating "the broken heart"... etc. Fantasy, in it's all means, is the greatest tool to use, it gives the most serious answers!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Well written. Thank you for sharing. Debileah