the greatest love story

the greatest love story

A Poem by raindroplove
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something diffenrt 
about are love
something fresh and new 
like something from above 

lips cheery red 
i can't get you 
out of my head

you can be you 
ill be me 
one day i'll get on one knee 
and beg you please 

then your dad 
will give you away 
i say i do 
you will to 

we'll have our first kid
will name him after your dad 
he'll be wild
just like me

we'll get old 
sitting on the swing 
watching our grandkids sing

i'll go
and see my father above 
you wait the you'll come

we'll be forever 
and have the greatest love story ever 
 

© 2011 raindroplove



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put a smile on my face!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ahhh such a delaration of love this is beautiful!

Posted 6 Years Ago


That's so CUTE!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very sweet!

Posted 6 Years Ago


this peom just made my day :) Good Job!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Such a sweet love story! Just run it through spell & grammar check.

Posted 6 Years Ago


so sweet! Made me smile!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Simply elegant.. A great show of words.

Mags xx

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I again ignore the spelling problems ;-)

Then I read a sweet poem. You have a poets heart rdl. Keep up the good work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very sweet and simple! Don't forget to double check your grammar, punctuation and spelling.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on April 28, 2011
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in your pocket, AL



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