alabama the beautiful

alabama the beautiful

A Poem by raindroplove
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we have hit by serval storms this is for us

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alabama so beautiful 
gone with out a sign 
194 died 
and theres so many more 
no power for millions 
no water for some 
please help us 
we need some love 


© 2011 raindroplove



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Posted 6 Years Ago


agree we need allot of help especially in this time of devastation

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alabama doesn't deserve so much heartache and pain. Hope things get better real soon.

Posted 6 Years Ago


A heartfelt plea for aid well done

Posted 6 Years Ago


What a beautiful tribute to such loss, i commend you for expressing your emotions in this form. May there be hope and blessing, and my prayers are with those who are impacted by the storms in any shape or form. I don't think i have any right to criticize such a plea, it would be a shame if i pulled out my grammar stick. Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This poem is wonderful! God bless you for writing this! Them and many others need so much prayer and help!

Posted 6 Years Ago


A sweet plea for help. I appreciate this poem. What a lovely way to appeal to the rest of the world.

Posted 6 Years Ago


God help the states and people devastated by the terrible storms

Posted 6 Years Ago


I hope things are getting better! Very nicely put.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is a great poem, alerting us of all the horrible loss that people have suffered. My prayers and love go out to all the people that have had any loss!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on April 29, 2011
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in your pocket, AL



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