a poem...

something i wrote i was ding i in the shower so maybe its a song....

it may be me 

baby it maybe you 

but i know one thing

im tierd of this fewed

im tierd of the games 

you play 

i think its time to give up

and walk away

baby i just need time 

to think aqbout us 

and whats mine

 

maybe its her 

or maybe its me 

but i know one thing 

im tierd of the hurt

im tierd of the brokeness 

i know this is hopeless 

i thinnk its time 

to take back whats mine 

i still need you in my life  

Reviews

[just is]

Such a heart tugging read,
Has a wonderful flow it could be a song.
Amazing!

[Suditi]

Yes, it is like a song!
Nice! :D

[Sarah]

it is realy sweet i loved it