Dreadful Sight

Dreadful Sight

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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This poems deals with adverse effects of nature.

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O Flood! O Flood! Stop your course, 
Where are you going with such a force? 
Are you annoyed by the deeds of man? 
Are you going to hit and slain? 

Yes, yes my dear poet; you understand 
The feelings of the water and the land 
But your brethren might forget 
The adverse effects that nature beget. 

Calm down, Calm down, O massive Wave! 
Isn't there's a way to save?  
The entire mankind will vanish 
By your wrath, they will banish. 

The time has gone my dear poet, 
Just wait and watch the dreadful sight.

© 2017 Raj Sahu



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Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much. 😊
it is beautiful the way you've used dialogue as a method for the poem :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you.
Your poem captured the very essence of nature's wrath, a rebellion against man in a flood. The visual you paired with the poem was marvellous as well. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thanks a lot dear Chris. 😊😊
A very interesting creative piece. I enjoyed the chaos and the stirring that swirls around the words. Keep it up!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much dear. 😊😊
PandaPeaceful

5 Months Ago

No problem. You deserve it.
Entire poem was an issue of concern and need to be focused well upon it ..... nature acts leaves none...very well penned the poem, Raj.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much dear friend.
Priyanshi

5 Months Ago

You're welcome.
Rage of nature for unpleasant acts of humans....
We have to suffer for the disturbance we created....
I liked it...:)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you dear writer.
Oh my, what a storm, the rage, the rush the power

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you sir!
The great storms. Not kind and they can destroy places and cities in minutes. I enjoyed your description. You made the storm come alive with your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your appreciation.
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

You are welcome. I enjoyed your work.
well we have been destroyed by water a few times,but there is more to come

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much dear. Yes, the natural disasters will one day vanish us all. 😞😞
Your piece is inspiring, creative and concerning. Please do, go ahead and check out mine as well. And thanks for sharing i truely enjoyed the read

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much dear. I am going to read yours too. 😊😊

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Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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