Dreadful Sight

Dreadful Sight

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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This poems deals with adverse effects of nature.

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O Flood! O Flood! Stop your course, 
Where are you going with such a force? 
Are you annoyed by the deeds of man? 
Are you going to hit and slain? 

Yes, yes my dear poet; you understand 
The feelings of the water and the land 
But your brethren might forget 
The adverse effects that nature beget. 

Calm down, Calm down, O massive Wave! 
Isn't there's a way to save?  
The entire mankind will vanish 
By your wrath, they will banish. 

The time has gone my dear poet, 
Just wait and watch the dreadful sight.

© 2017 Raj Sahu



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The entire story made me to realise that humans are on the verge of extinction. They should abate their actions which is harmful for the purity of nature. You presented a serious issue in an attractive way, which I liked most. Thank you for sharing such a deep poem.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Thanks a lot!



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I am horrified with such a wave! Nature is so strong to vanish us all.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Yes, you're right. Thanks.
What if again we struck by a flood? We should save our beloved earth.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Thank you!
Nature...Anger...er...I fear...I can't bear..er..

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Thank you.
“Yes, yes my dear poet; you understand
The feelings of the water and the land
But your brethren might forget
The adverse effects that nature beget."

Nature should need to be conserved but human greed is destroying it.
Your work is so positive that its vibes is smearing all around. The conversation between the poet and inundation is a beautiful way to express the emotion. The warning in last two lines is threatening. Looking for more of your works.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Thank you very earnestly. I agreed fully.
Nature's fury is the dreadful sight one can ever behold! You made the deluge live by your words...I really laud you for this work...commendable..

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Thank you!
The entire story made me to realise that humans are on the verge of extinction. They should abate their actions which is harmful for the purity of nature. You presented a serious issue in an attractive way, which I liked most. Thank you for sharing such a deep poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Thanks a lot!
Thank you for entering your poem as always :)

The rhyme scheme, imagery and description is very lovely

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
such a good poem! Such a beautifully scary topic. You captured the dread in such a romantic way. good job!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Months Ago

Thank you!
Your submission is now read in the http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Nature%2C-Auroras%2C-Lights%2C-Trees%2C-Water%2C-Outdoors-Contest/54059/ please stay tuned for the winning poems. Thank you for your entry. I loved the poem!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much. 😊
it is beautiful the way you've used dialogue as a method for the poem :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you.

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Added on May 1, 2017
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Tags: Flood, Vanish, Fright, Poet, Mankind

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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Hello everyone. Myself Raj Sahu, a 17-year-old boy who is a servant of the God until his last breath. I write poems and thinks that in future I will try other writings too. I also love reading. My fav.. more..

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