My God, My Magician

My God, My Magician

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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The poem highlights the value of god's mercy and his everyday works for his children.

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Everyday he shows me different tricks,
Always he acts as a Sorcerer.
From the cluster of my pains he picks,
And he acts as my deliverer.

Cardician of my life you are, 
Your words acts as a thumper.
In your hands are my fortune cards bizarre,
And I believe the success will be bumper.

Your blessings are enchantments for me.
Paranormal are your works in my life.
I am singing your praise now and always be,
Your mercies and boons are rife.

O My God! My Magician! Keep doing your magic.
You are the only one who delivers me from this life tragic.

© 2017 Raj Sahu



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This is a nice read. Idk if you've read it, but I have written a religious poem on here, too. It's about Christ, so it's different, obviously. I like how you show that god is testing us on this earth, and giving us trials, but it's not to see if we are good enough to handle it, but to see if we are humble enough to ask for his help. Nice read! You should read mine. I think it's called "I remember"

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gee

4 Days Ago

Nope, that's even worse..
Duncan Brown

4 Days Ago

Duncan, vote.......................................................................................... read more
Gee

4 Days Ago

Hmmm, I'll leave you to practice....



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A good poem, indeed! I liked it. The words you've used are very thoughtful! Keep writing!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

3 Months Ago

Thank you.
Anjali

3 Months Ago

You are very welcome!
Your submission is now read in the http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Nature%2C-Auroras%2C-Lights%2C-Trees%2C-Water%2C-Outdoors-Contest/54059/ please stay tuned for the winning poems. Thank you for your entry.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thank you. 😊
Very creative. Explaining Gods power can be tricky and your approach here works!
Tabby

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much. 😊
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Bec
Wow! I love the way it ended as well. Indeed, very magical.



Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thank you a lot dear. 😊
This is a nice read. Idk if you've read it, but I have written a religious poem on here, too. It's about Christ, so it's different, obviously. I like how you show that god is testing us on this earth, and giving us trials, but it's not to see if we are good enough to handle it, but to see if we are humble enough to ask for his help. Nice read! You should read mine. I think it's called "I remember"

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gee

4 Days Ago

Nope, that's even worse..
Duncan Brown

4 Days Ago

Duncan, vote.......................................................................................... read more
Gee

4 Days Ago

Hmmm, I'll leave you to practice....
I don't really know how to review this poem because i am religious myself and i don't really know if i agree that he picks my pains AND delivers me, I would say that he delivers me from the pains inflicted on me by myself or the world, and i don't kno if i would use the term sorcerer or magician because the term magician can suggest lies because magicians are illusionists, but i do understand that its meant to be uplifting. This is not saying that i don't like the poem, I'm just sayin that it could be interpreted in different ways.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

The seekers of positiveness will interpret it positively. Thanks for your review. 😊
nice one..............I like it


Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you. 😊
Writing on religion can be controversial the way around that is to write about spiritualism as every religion is based on it. Which is what you have done here and highlighting the mysticism many overlook makes it even more appealing. Well done Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much dear Bear. 😊
a bit different and logical one... i truly liked it...
keep writing

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much. 😊
I like the rhyme scheme, and I like what this conveys. It's nice to see another view on god, the generous magician. Excellent work.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you dear Chris. 😊😊

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Tags: Magician, God, Sorcerer, Boon, Mercy

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Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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