My God, My Magician

My God, My Magician

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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The poem highlights the value of god's mercy and his everyday works for his children.

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Everyday he shows me different tricks,
Always he acts as a Sorcerer.
From the cluster of my pains he picks,
And he acts as my deliverer.

Cardician of my life you are, 
Your words acts as a thumper.
In your hands are my fortune cards bizarre,
And I believe the success will be bumper.

Your blessings are enchantments for me.
Paranormal are your works in my life.
I am singing your praise now and always be,
Your mercies and boons are rife.

O My God! My Magician! Keep doing your magic.
You are the only one who delivers me from this life tragic.

© 2017 Raj Sahu



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“Your blessings are enchantments for me.
Paranormal are your works in my life.
I am singing your praise now and always be,
Your mercies and boons are rife.

O My God! My Magician! Keep doing your magic.
You are the only one who delivers me from this life tragic."

It is a very good part of this work which is really filled with optimism. I liked your faith over the God. It is the very humbleness in you which makes you to compose this work. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

Thanks a lot!



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God's works are always beneficial for us.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

Thank you.
An honourable psalm for God. Simile between him and a magician is appropriate.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

Thank you.
God...magician...er..amazing..er..

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

Thank you.
“Everyday he shows me different tricks,
Always he acts as a Sorcerer.
From the cluster of my pains he picks,
And he acts as my deliverer."

God is omnipotent, omnipresent and omniscient. I believe in him and he keeps his eyes upon us.
Now, about your work, the terms you used in your poem such as sorcerer, cardician, tricks are all related to magic ; which is unique to see. The very account of God you draw is wonderful and I like it. I can see the gratitude of yours towards God very clearly. Looking for more of your works.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

Thanks from the core of my heart! Yes, God is great.
A good praise for God..Lovely poem

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

Thank you.
“Your blessings are enchantments for me.
Paranormal are your works in my life.
I am singing your praise now and always be,
Your mercies and boons are rife.

O My God! My Magician! Keep doing your magic.
You are the only one who delivers me from this life tragic."

It is a very good part of this work which is really filled with optimism. I liked your faith over the God. It is the very humbleness in you which makes you to compose this work. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

Thanks a lot!
Wonderful, uplifting!!! God´s magic works even when we don't understand, for he knows what is best for us all, long before we even know... I love the words and the poem!!

Well done!!!
:-)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
A good poem, indeed! I liked it. The words you've used are very thoughtful! Keep writing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you.
Anjali

1 Year Ago

You are very welcome!
Your submission is now read in the http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Nature%2C-Auroras%2C-Lights%2C-Trees%2C-Water%2C-Outdoors-Contest/54059/ please stay tuned for the winning poems. Thank you for your entry.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you. 😊
Very creative. Explaining Gods power can be tricky and your approach here works!
Tabby

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much. 😊

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Added on May 14, 2017
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Tags: Magician, God, Sorcerer, Boon, Mercy

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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Hello everyone. Myself Raj Sahu, a 17-year-old boy who is a servant of the God until his last breath. I write poems and thinks that in future I will try other writings too. I also love reading. My fav.. more..

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