A Man's Wish

A Man's Wish

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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This poem is based on random thoughts of a man who has a farsight.

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I feel I need to learn again,
The art of keeping time.
So more and more I can gain,
The success by keeping it as prime.
And more and more I constrain;
The obnoxious acts of mankind's crime.

The world needs to be helpful,
As the creator always taught us to be.
It needs to be forever youthful,
To help the needy; promptly one see.
This act will make the world more beautiful
And one will get help whenever he plea.

When I will learn to keep the time,
I will available for others readily.
I will render help to those who are grime
And humanity will run steadily.
Everywhere this act will sublime
And men will not charitable formally.

When the pot of everyone's kindness,
Will fill with their idle and waste hours.
All will do more and more acts of goodness,
So that the deprived ones will empower's.
God's love for this world is full of blindness
And we thanks him that he is ours.

Finally, I conclude; these are random ideas
And I wish that these may come true.
The world will fill with helpful petunias
And maybe these thoughts will spread anew.
All we need to spare time from all the areas
And work as an entire crew.


© 2017 Raj Sahu



Author's Note

Raj Sahu
As you read that this poem is based on random thoughts of a man who has a far sight. He doesnot flatter in the poem but wishes that may he spares some time for mankind to help. He also insist others to opt this act so that the world will be beautiful. He also gave reference of God's love. May be some readers find this poem a little weird, but I said previously; these are just random thoughts.

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When I read your author's note, it sounds like you're anticipating rejection of your message. I encourage you to be confident in your truth and not worry about those who might not understand or like it. There will always be lovers & haters who read us.

Overall, I think your message is well-written & well-expressed to show a lighthearted optimism & encouragement to live our best lives. I like the various examples & details you use to show us what a best life might look like. I can understand everything, but once in awhile the construction of your English seems a little awkward to figure out the meaning or maybe it sounds wrong to the ear as far as spoken English. But you're doing well & just keep practicing to get better.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much Mam. You always inspires me. 😊



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Thanks again for entry into my other comp good luck still love this

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

3 Days Ago

Thank you.
thanks again for entering this into another comp called my other hobby i read this again and loved it even more i especially love the 2nd last verse, thanks beautiful penmanship

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you.
thanks for entering this into my what i dream for competition, its very rhyming, liked it a lot, very deep liked that a lot too though made me think ! and also very well thought out.good luck1

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much!
Wow..help in this world so great..er..good man

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

Thank you.
“When the pot of everyone's kindness,
Will fill with their idle and waste hours.
All will do more and more acts of goodness,
So that the deprived ones will empower's.
God's love for this world is full of blindness
And we thanks him that he is ours."

The farsighted man has a philosophical ideology and I should say a helping ideology which is hard to see anywhere in today's busy world.
Now, about your poem, the views you put forward to help others are really too great and I hope that you should also follow them wholeheartedly. The rhyming of the poem is so beautiful and the image you paste here depicted the entire gist of the poem. I wish that may the world filled with such kind of people who has the ideology like this man. Looking forward to your works.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

Thanks a lot. I too wished the same.
So true and wonderful are your words- we all need to take time to look and see deeper to experience what’s going on within the hearts of others - we know the ones that really care are those who make time even though they may not have time- and being punctual is so important as it shows our values and morals- we all need to spend more time- money cannot get back wasted wanted time- great words- very important🌹

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

Thanks from the bottom of my heart.
Rose Petal🌹

2 Months Ago

Pleasure from the bottom of mine🌹
I doubt whether any such man lives on this earth...the ideas and wisdom you showed in your works are very idealistic... I like your rhymes and chosen words..keep writing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

Thank you again.
“The world needs to be helpful,
As the creator always taught us to be.
It needs to be forever youthful,
To help the needy; promptly one see.
This act will make the world more beautiful
And one will get help whenever he plea"

I like the central idea of the theme- to render help to the needy. If this is the wish of any man, I should bow before him. It is not always as easy as a pie to help anyone anytime. The people of world are busy in filling their own pots. Very good read.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

O So lovely of you. Thank you again for your motivating words.
May the world hear your thoughts and share your wish.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Months Ago

Thank you!
Well written piece of writing
Much thought was put into this.
Good work lad

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Months Ago

Thank you.

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Tags: Thoughts, Ideas, Time, Crew, World, Humanity, Help, Needer, Thruthful, Love, God

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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Hello everyone. Myself Raj Sahu, a 17-year-old boy who is a servant of the God until his last breath. I write poems and thinks that in future I will try other writings too. I also love reading. My fav.. more..

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