A Mathematical Rhapsody

A Mathematical Rhapsody

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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This poem shows the sentiments of a mathematician towards his lover in mathematical form.

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I doubt; Can I live long rather?
As we both are parallel lines, which do not meet each other.

To understand you is a task very hard;
Before that, the problems of Mensuration I will regard.

Expressions of your face frequently deviates,
That the comprehension of sine and cosine alleviates.

Our only meeting of love made me disappoint.
It was like a tangent that meets a circle only at one point.

I promised you there that all your expenses I will afford.
As I am the diameter of my family circle, which is the longest chord.

My love towards you will truly suit.
It is a quadratic equation of real root.

In your friend circle, I was too your friend.
But I was like an Arithmetic Progression's term of the end.

Your deception make me full of sorrow,
My life becomes as a cylinder hollow.

In your love, I myself dangle.
I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.
It seems to me that I am an endless construction. 



© 2017 Raj Sahu



Author's Note

Raj Sahu
It is a little weird and humorous.

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This was a very nice writing exercise and it is always good to see a poet testing their talents looking for new forms and formats to expand their skills. Many years ago when I taught poetry I suggest that every time you wrote a poem you make use of a now word that you had never used before. That not only increases your vocabulary but opens new poetry possibilities with every new word, something to consider. Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Months Ago

Thanks a lot dear Bear. 😊
Bear

6 Months Ago

This is the kind of writing that can help you make a career in the writing field so keep pushing you.. read more
Raj Sahu

6 Months Ago

Yes, thanks once again. 😊



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Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maths was never my strong point but this speaks loud and clear of the way love can make us so crazy.
Especially loved the sense of 'incompleteness' at the end Raj.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
Am impressed... yea some lines in there made me chuckle. Never seen it done like this before. Kudos.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
This is SO CLEVER!! Very, very impressed with this rhyme. You've managed to use so many mathematical facts and words and yet interweave a love story! This is great Raj. Entertaining and educational. Super writing. Thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much. 😊
you have kept words so interesting that every line of that poem is giving sense of feeling love very emotional and I like one part of that is
""My love towards you will truly suit.
It is a quadratic equation of real root.""

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much. 😊
It is amazingly written in mathematically matter. The sense is there and the essence of the true meaning of your poem mixes with the geometry and trigonometry. Keep writing! :D

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you a lot. 😊
Nicely done. A clever construction, well thought out. I hope the subject of the poem has a good math education though, or she won't understand a word! :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Truly said! Thank you very much. 😊
I think my favorite thing about this poem is that it takes both intelligence and whimsy from the writer to create such a piece. I often find one or the other, but rarely do I find both at once!!! Well done!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thanks a lot. 😊
Duncan Brown

2 Months Ago

France vote........................................................................................... read more
This was fabulous! Love the combination of the creative and the logic, very well done!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much. 😊
you may have solved a mystery,love

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much. 😊

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Tags: Maths, Love, Sorrow, Humour, Lines

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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