A Mathematical Rhapsody

A Mathematical Rhapsody

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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This poem shows the sentiments of a mathematician towards his lover in mathematical form.

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I doubt; Can I live long rather?
As we both are parallel lines, which do not meet each other.

To understand you is a task very hard;
Before that, the problems of Mensuration I will regard.

Expressions of your face frequently deviates,
That the comprehension of sine and cosine alleviates.

Our only meeting of love made me disappoint.
It was like a tangent that meets a circle only at one point.

I promised you there that all your expenses I will afford.
As I am the diameter of my family circle, which is the longest chord.

My love towards you will truly suit.
It is a quadratic equation of real root.

In your friend circle, I was too your friend.
But I was like an Arithmetic Progression's term of the end.

Your deception make me full of sorrow,
My life becomes as a cylinder hollow.

In your love, I myself dangle.
I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.
It seems to me that I am an endless construction. 

© 2017 Raj Sahu


Author's Note

Raj Sahu
It is a little weird and humorous.

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“In your love, I myself dangle.
I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.
It seems to me that I am an endless construction."

I should really applaud this work of you for both of its parameters- unique and humorous. I am really startled how one can knit a poem, a poem of love, through the central theme- Mathematics. It is really an amazing work. Somewhere I find rhymes a little odd, but it's effect outshone by this amazing love comedy. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Years Ago

Thanks from the core of my heart!



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Wow! Maths is my favourite subject. Nice poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Years Ago

Thank you.
Lover may be confounded with such mathematical similes. But nice poem, an unique tried.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Years Ago

Thank you.
Love+Maths=Humour...er...er..nice mixture..love the rhymes..er..

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
“My love towards you will truly suit.
It is a quadratic equation of real root.

Your deception make me full of sorrow,
My life becomes as a cylinder hollow."

To mix love with maths is a very unique thing I ever saw. Love is too attractive but maths is harsh.(Sorry to Maths lovers)
Now, about your work, you have put up an awesome synchronization between maths and love. I like your similes in the poem and the colour too. Keep writing.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Years Ago

Yes, I am agree with you that Maths is harsh. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Now, it's a blend of love, humour and MATHEMATICS.. Oh I should say you are having innate ability to write poetry on such rare topics and they are pretty well composed...I love this composition most..

Posted 5 Years Ago


Raj Sahu

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!
“In your love, I myself dangle.
I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.
It seems to me that I am an endless construction."

I should really applaud this work of you for both of its parameters- unique and humorous. I am really startled how one can knit a poem, a poem of love, through the central theme- Mathematics. It is really an amazing work. Somewhere I find rhymes a little odd, but it's effect outshone by this amazing love comedy. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Years Ago

Thanks from the core of my heart!
A amazing poem. Math and poetry. Perfect.
In your life, I am one of the obstruction.
It seems to me that I am an endless construction. "
Thank you Raj for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote


Posted 5 Years Ago


Raj Sahu

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Raj.
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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maths was never my strong point but this speaks loud and clear of the way love can make us so crazy.
Especially loved the sense of 'incompleteness' at the end Raj.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Am impressed... yea some lines in there made me chuckle. Never seen it done like this before. Kudos.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much.

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Added on June 5, 2017
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Tags: Maths, Love, Sorrow, Humour, Lines

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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Myself Raj Sahu from the historic town of Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India. I had completed my high schooling with flying colours from Choithram School, Indore in Humanities stream and was first in or.. more..

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