Chivalrous Thoughts

Chivalrous Thoughts

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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This is a poem based on power of fiery thoughts of a poet.

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My enamoring thoughts that emerges always,
From a fictitious source inside the body.
They proved to be grueling for some;
Fascinating for others and confounding for many.

My provoking thoughts, flamboyant shaped;
Sometimes flaccid but autonomous always,
Seems to form a colossal hallucination.
But their depicts deep meaning over minds.
A fusillade of thoughts leave profound marks over many.

© 2017 Raj Sahu



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This feels like an analytical description that goes well with your space-age artwork. I admire your complex vocabulary: "grueling" . . . "confounding" . . . "provoking" . . . "flamboyant" . . . "colossal" . . . such words don't give your message a poetic feeling but conveys the harshness of the situation. This feels more like wordplay than a distinct message that really captures something with familiarity. Wordplay is a good thing, by the way.

Posted 6 Months Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Months Ago

Thank you very much.



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Wow! Very colourful and your chosen photograph was striking!

Thank you for entering, I find such power in your words :)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Really great piece, the wording structure and the description goes really well together.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
i love the picture, and the words.a lot of big words. you sound very intelligent. and the vocabulary made it sound sophisticated.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thanks a lot!
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nice poem
learned a great deal of words. you have good vocab
but what you need to learn is how to turn those vibes into such that would give out a poetic ambiance, the poem itself was clever and great. it would have been made even great if there was simplicity
other than that i think you have done a great job

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
Incredibly profound and of great meaning. A unique voice. Good job.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
Amazing piece of poetry!!!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thanks a lot.
This feels like an analytical description that goes well with your space-age artwork. I admire your complex vocabulary: "grueling" . . . "confounding" . . . "provoking" . . . "flamboyant" . . . "colossal" . . . such words don't give your message a poetic feeling but conveys the harshness of the situation. This feels more like wordplay than a distinct message that really captures something with familiarity. Wordplay is a good thing, by the way.

Posted 6 Months Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
Wow..i found it deep and very brilliant work, Raj.
Keep it up.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
Priyanshi

6 Months Ago

My pleasure.
This poem is awesome! So enjoyed the elevated words and musings. Such a deep exploration with a little humor to break through the thickness. Beautiful! Keep them coming!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
Allows to me to imagine al sorts of wonderful things by the power of the words in your poem. Being able to see images through a specific thought is beyond talent. Thank you for sharing.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Months Ago

Thanks a lot!

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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