Chivalrous Thoughts

Chivalrous Thoughts

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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This is a poem based on power of fiery thoughts of a poet.

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My enamoring thoughts that emerges always,
From a fictitious source inside the body.
They proved to be grueling for some;
Fascinating for others and confounding for many.

My provoking thoughts, flamboyant shaped;
Sometimes flaccid but autonomous always,
Seems to form a colossal hallucination.
But they depicts deep meaning over minds.
A fusillade of thoughts leave profound marks over many.

© 2018 Raj Sahu



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This feels like an analytical description that goes well with your space-age artwork. I admire your complex vocabulary: "grueling" . . . "confounding" . . . "provoking" . . . "flamboyant" . . . "colossal" . . . such words don't give your message a poetic feeling but conveys the harshness of the situation. This feels more like wordplay than a distinct message that really captures something with familiarity. Wordplay is a good thing, by the way.

Posted 1 Year Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much.



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i especially loved the very last line!
great work
thanks for entering again into my comp

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Thank you.
thanks once more for entering this into my competition, the wording in this is just right and its a beautiful piece of work, thanks again

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Months Ago

Thank you.
thanks for entering into why i write competition, great poem

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thank you. 🙏💕
Very profound and formative.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thank you!
I enjoyed your words and thoughts. Our minds never rest. Always seeking and pondering. Thank you Raj for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
It is indeed a wordplay. I like it.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thank you.
Oh! So brave thoughts. I think you are a philosopher or someone like prophet?

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Oh! You exaggerated the meaning. Thanks.
another nice work from you..er..thanks

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thank you!
“My enamoring thoughts that emerges always,
From a fictitious source inside the body.
They proved to be grueling for some;
Fascinating for others and confounding for many."

Fiery thoughts of a person can bring the change in a society and ultimately in the whole country or should I say that it causes a huge revolution.
Now, about your work, you portrayed your invisible but strong thoughts very well here. I am agreed that such powerful thoughts are gruelling for those who are corrupted and don't want a change in a society. I like the repetition ‘My enamouring thoughts', ‘My provoking thoughts' and the use of word ‘many' at the end of both the stanzas. It is a bold read indeed. Looking for more of your works.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thanks from the depth of my heart! I appreciate your review.
Oh! I should say you used tough vocabulary in it....for some I have to refer to a dictionary...but the image and text concomitantly cleared everything...your thoughts can cause a revolution... Good!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thanks a lot!

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Added on August 15, 2017
Last Updated on February 25, 2018
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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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Hello everyone. Myself Raj Sahu, a 17-year-old boy who is a servant of the God until his last breath. I write poems and thinks that in future I will try other writings too. I also love reading. My fav.. more..

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