frustration

frustration

A Poem by Rakesh Roushan
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it feels like but if it is ... just a new poem from my heart under ongoing depression

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IT FEELS LIKE BUT IF IT..

just two answers i want from thee
what heck is life and worth living in it..

its sort of fun or fare or bizarre
or it the calmness or the soul
that i want to understand 
help me thee finding these
for me they are surreal peas

it feels like weeks and it feels like years
but its neither weeks nor years
its like the feeling of getting in something
but again the same disappointment of loosing everything
the feeling so intense so powerful
makes me feel quite dreadful 

it feels like achieving the zenith
like marring the hell out of a warrior
it feels like all thing i want to achieve
what i am craving for and what i preach
it feels like total and it feels like still nothing
it feels like in motion but still it is still

the feel of feeling these ravage me
for the quick hour desolate me
i want to break free free from these
where i can live reckless free
help me o god to turn these
and let me be me the only me ..

© 2011 Rakesh Roushan


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A good read. You express what you feel in this poem and it doesn't matter in what form you place it, words speak for themselves. Depression is a powerful emotion that causes us to create mistakes but if we fight against it, happiness will come your way again.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I wrote surreal peas as symbolism to describe that its really turning hard for me to find happiness in life as like when you dont know the right way of opening the pods to get peas from them, they can get crushed if you press too hard or you may find it difficult to open the pods good so i used that here .. I hope now its clear to you

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is quite cool, I enjoyed reading it.
One question though, what do you mean by 'surreal peas'? Without knowing the meaning, it sounds like a forced rhyme.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well said. Ecstasy and Agony. Both and None. I love this piece:)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 7, 2011
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Rakesh Roushan
Rakesh Roushan

raipur, chhatisgarh, India



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