Waiting

waiting for someone's answer the time is either running too fast or just freezes ... so just a poem which will make you realize feelings of someone who is waiting for you somewhere at some place.....

so impatiently i want to hear

my hands are shaking in fear

if everything is alright

nothing has went wrong

I want to clear

The time is passing like running bull

in the arena injuring me so dull

Waiting for you

for to hear atleast once from you

I have done no wrong 

then why are you ignoring me so real

Waiting for your words

to trawl my mind

Waiting for your innocent laugh

to make me relieved of their

Waiting for your cosmic smile

which makes everything seem so unreal

Waiting for your hypnotising touch

which makes me feel thee

Just waiting for you my mighty

Waiting......Waiting....Waiting..

Reviews

[Sugar and Spice]

I loved this! You did so well in isolating the feeling of waiting :)

[Aswin Suresh Nair]

I like its flow. Great work.

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Wow This is amazing, I love this, such a wonderful flow and rhyme schme.

[MetBySunlight]

This is good, it's like some of the emotion is mysterious, leading the reader to find their own feelings through this poem.

[Dove]

I really like how you used words to express jow you feel. This piece has a lot of emotion hidden inside of it. Beautiful

[Misty_Prophet]

This is really good. I like how you expressed your emotions throughout the poem

[Dahlia Phoenix]

A wonderful write! This poem conveys a lot of emotions when we wait for a simple answer or touch...it aches to never know such a thing. I love flow of your words and the message they create.

[idk]

Woah. This is sooo good!! You are an amazing author!

[Alex Miller<3]

This is amazing :) great job! keep it up, look forward to read future writings :)