U needa Know

U needa Know

A Poem by Rakesh Roushan
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I want that you should be aware of what i feel about you .. my love ..

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You needa know
how much I love you
You needa know
how much I miss you

I just cant tell you ohh baby
you drive my soul so goddamn crazy
every thought of you 
makes me want to feel you forever
I just can't resist this feeling
as it is driving me thrilling

You needa know
you my love is my heaven
You needa know
with you my love starts my crescent

This is just getting messier
I am starving for you so nastier
I want you all my life
Ohh baby you are my enigmatic soul
Ohh baby you are my breaking dawn
This is for true I love you

You needa know 
I want to be your moon not the sun
You needa know
I have devoted this life of mine to shine yours

Baby whenever you are not here
It feels like so unreal
I bet the world for sure
you are my angelic cheer
and whenever the doom comes
I will be with you there

You needa know
how much I love you
You needa know
how much I miss you

© 2011 Rakesh Roushan


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Great write:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hmmm, I get the write and find it intriguing as well as enjoyable. But I didnt understand the reason behind having to write "need to" as "needa"... other wise its a very loving piece almost lyrical. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hmmm interesting. I really empathized with the beginning. Sometimes a certain person can drive you absolutely insane! The middle got a bit carnal but only for a blink which was surprising. I liked the sweet, sad ending.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I agree with "paparapapa"... lol!... :) Very sweet and "Extra whipped"... cream, that is. ;) I love how honest and raw the emotions are conveyed in this piece. Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


The poem flowed like good music. I like the repetition making the poem purpose come out strong. Missing someone leave us sad and wishing for a reunion. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


WOW I LOVE THIS!!! Soo touching, longing and full of L.O.V.E!!!

Awesome job! I put this to my faves 4 sure. :)

This really hits straight into my heart cause I know those feelings, I've been there and still I am.

Love,
Sarah

I'll give 100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


A good romantic poem that reads like a monologue to a dear lover.
The poem describes to the reader a person who is dear to the narrator in love giving the speech, it also describes how much they mean to the narrator, and their impact with their absence.
To do this all in a first person perspective is true to the romantic genre... definitely have enjoyed reading it. It gives off a warming pleasurable atmosphere to the audience evoking their understandings of the concept of trust, care, and devotion to another person.
some constructive criticism though: in some lines, you have one extra word that'll knock off the rhythmic beat a bit. (feel free to message me if you either need help finding them) sometimes errors like this are overlooked during free-thinking a poem, aka writing off the top of your head and running with it... I do this alot :p I would imagine it's a common thing, but anyways, rereading the poem with a steady pace should highlight them.
Overall: 94/100 is a good score I think... I enjoyed it ^_^ and good work mate, and keep it up

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love the flow. Its really beautiful and I enjoyed readinf this loevely piece. Keep up the amazing work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yeah!!! I have written a song ... I just wanted to share it with you in the form of poetry


Posted 12 Years Ago


Ohh I like this! Very cute!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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