Silence

just me and the gentle voice of silence

Silence is profound.
Rumors are on it.
Unspoken voice of silence, I hear from you.
Intense feeling, echoed and repeated!

In silence, I hold on
You touch my soul and I touch yours.
Unseen scene occurred by us.
And silence comes again.

Conquer me, I beg
I'll stay with you, be your woman
Rhymed silence, I do hear
Sssshhh silence, I don't blame!

Silence makes me aware of you.
I connive,wondering about us.
Does your system miss me,as I long for you?
Silence interrupt!

Oh, my dearest one.
I'm cared and loved, thank you.
Even in silence, I could sense you.
Silence, I grant everywhere!

Reviews

[C. Harter Amos]

I think you give an apt description of what silence can mean & the potential it holds for us to explore our own feelings & awareness of others. It's a beautifully romantic piece. Your personal style of writing adds to the feeling of mysterious and to the depth. Really nice poetry.

[Lyrical Love]

Shhh... silence! LOL!!
Wonderfully written.

[Orlando Murcia]

All I have to say is AWSOME JOB!!!

Orlando M

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Very sweet sound silence. Very nice write.

[None]

I believe sometimes silence is needed to sort out feelings and emotions--to think on love.
Your words...."Conquer me, I beg
I'll stay with you, be your woman" ...are so strong and show that you want that person to take you on and brand you and in turn you will give yourself. Action and reaction. Excellent poem!

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

nicely done well written, this is an magnificent little poem full of strength and wonder.

[Celtic Cat]

I like it! Silence is definitely a beautiful thing. I liked this perspective of it...through your eyes. Very cool.

[logmein]

I like the flow of this poem. This topic is addressed a lot in poems. I think you have captured a side to the topic that is not used often. Silence, I grant everywhere. I like that.

[Chad Wesley Allbrett]

I like this a lot, silence as a friend, and words and sound itself superfluous. I lot of us talk even though we ain't sayin' nothin'.

[Amanda]

a lovely poem...that can be interpreted in many ways.

i see that the silence can be the lover in the dark, the voice that only you can hear, the feeling of touch that your skin craves and wrapped in. it can be a wonderous sense of being loved and to love in return without boundaries, without limits....

thanks =)

[Anthony Morningstar]

It's like a different approach and it's really exciting to see something like this. Usually most poems that try to deal with subjects like this use light as opposed to sound this lack of sound. There's something that reminds of how everything refuses not to exist. But at the same time doesn't really. And at the same time a human atirubute like love is one of those things.