The Deep

The Deep

A Poem by Rashi Jain
"

Have you ever wondered How powerful Ocean is?

"

                                      The Deep

  -Rashi Jain



The blue blanket of ocean

is a gateway that opens

to a wide green world

thousands of miles deep

hiding the bulliest secrets

not yet discovered.

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This green world is where

friends and foes flicker together

chasing and beating and slaying and dancing

heart's elation and sorrow where stay.

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Even the lusty winds can't harm the deep

whatever drowns in it is its then

the masters of power and wealth

are the bluish faces of ocean.

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Its elegant beauty narrates faintly

the mysteries that lie beneath

no one will ever get them

and that's the power of the Deep...

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© 2015 Rashi Jain



Author's Note

Rashi Jain
Please add to my imagination and let me be aware of more things that you want from the 15 years old poet.

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The last time I was here I put you on my "Friends" List. Now I see why. This is a gorgeous poem, made even my gorgeous by the visuals you put with it. I enjoyed very much. I don't like to "rate" people's poetry, I let my words do that for me.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As a former marine biologist I can appreciate the imagery here!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful poem, what wonderful pictures to highlight your words. Sighing, wishing i could inhale the smells and feel of the air..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thankyou so much
These images made me feel like I was at the ocean again!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

i am glad to hear this
I love the images you used its powerful

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thanks Siddhi
siddhi

1 Year Ago

just want a favor
want you to read spring meadows
it s like your peoms

.. read more
I have never seen an ocean in real but thanks for making me visit it through your wonderful poem... good work

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

I am glad to hear such a comment.Thank you
What a great poem loved the details makes me want to go live their 😊

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

That's good. Thank-you
A beautiful poem. The sea is my favorite place. I like the photos and the description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you so much
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
I love the images you used to break up the poem because the give us a visual reminder as well as your lovely words how beautiful the ocean truly is :) I love it all but my favourite part is "This green world is where
friends and foes flicker together
chasing and beating and slaying and dancing
heart's elation and sorrow where stay.", it's so true, the sea is majestic and also takes no prisoners, it is the most powerful thing, and your poem really shows that, thank you x

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

That means a lot thank-you
Nicely done. Well written, with an easy flow that sparks the imagination. Good job

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thankyou So much

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Rashi Jain
Rashi Jain

New Delhi, India



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Hello Everyone. 💖 I am a 17 year old Indian girl who loves to Sing🎤 and write.📃 I love to play Piano.🎹 I am not a professional but Passion hides the flaws. ㈏.. more..

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