You Make Someone Go On

You Make Someone Go On

A Poem by Rashi Jain
"

Foe someone you love

"

                                   You Make Someone Go on.

      -Rashi Jain  

There is someone,

Who loves you,

When you forget,

how to love yourself.


There is someone,

Who faces your black mood,

Just because,they love you so much.


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There is someone,

Who just wants to smile,

Because you get the strength.


There is also the one,

Who makes you,

even more beautiful.

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So Never stop,

Because you make,

someone go on..


There is someone,

Who got nothing.

But got everything for you.


There is the one,

whose world,whose dreams,

lies within you.

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There is someone,

Who just wants,

your presence everywhere.


Believe me,there is someone,

who will trust you,

when everybody will shiver to do so.


So Never stop,

because you make,

someone go on..

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© 2015 Rashi Jain



Author's Note

Rashi Jain
Please add to my imagination and let me be aware of more things that you want from the 15 years old poet.

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A good hopeful poem. Loved it.
Yes.. There'll surely be someone who loves you for who you are.Someone who has seen your darkest of sides and still remained with you. I totally agree with your poem. And here age doesn't matter.What you bring to the readers does. ;)
Keep writing and I hope to read more of your writes.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

4 Months Ago

Thank-you 💕❤



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Hopefully nice lovely poem have such poem sharing with us.
Thanks for sharing

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

4 Months Ago

Thank-you 💕❤
A good hopeful poem. Loved it.
Yes.. There'll surely be someone who loves you for who you are.Someone who has seen your darkest of sides and still remained with you. I totally agree with your poem. And here age doesn't matter.What you bring to the readers does. ;)
Keep writing and I hope to read more of your writes.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

4 Months Ago

Thank-you 💕❤
"On this earth since 2000" Well, if you say so, but I have to agree with a previous review, you're beyond your age...Perhaps, an older wiser soul resides within. Women (I say with a comfort in the risk) don't usually learn the complexity that's intertwined in meanings here until they enter their thirty+ years on earth. A personal masterpiece for me, I had to fav' it.

Thanks for the "100/100" share!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you so much.
I would just let the "15 year old poet" know that she is years beyond many with much more experience, including this one ( well maybe :) ) and to that I would suggest you continue in your practice and commitment to verse and to prose, giving, all and everything you have and everything you summon from your source because there will come times when "everything" is required. It may seem given at first but know that owning your place in poetry is not always given ..but in better terms ..Look to the blank page and bleed.

This is a wonderful read and extremely soft in flow. All other critique falls under the category of, "You will know once the moment arrives" and no doubt you will rise and be ready for that occasion. A truly wonderful talent to see and read...Thank you for sharing~

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

I have marked your previous words.they mean a lot. Thank-you for sparing your time to read my poem.I.. read more
Perdition

1 Year Ago

UH-huh...well because you are a poet, and a worthy potential at that, I have deided to let you live .. read more
Omg loved it I felt this one I'm in ahhh😊

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thanks Pink Elephant
I agree. A place for the all of us.
"There is someone,
Who just wants,
your presence everywhere."
Gentle and positive words left the reader in a good place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thanks.I appreciate :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
Again, your poetry is marvelous and it's been a joy reading it, it's witty and clever and as always beautifully written. My favourite line is: " There is someone, who faces your black mood", I can relate to this very well :D Fantastic job x

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you so much.You motivate me!
BlaqkShadow

1 Year Ago

I can be a cheerleader!
Rashi! That's an amazing poem. It's like truth. Or maybe I'm just relating it with my life. But, thank you for sharing such excellent poetry. Happy to see such talent. Keep it up.
~Aru.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you so much
Very Nice.... bhahoot khooob.... :)


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Shukriya Uday
Uday Bhasuthker

1 Year Ago

My pleasure... :)
this is beautiful, really beautiful

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you Silver Shadow.
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

1 Year Ago

welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Rashi Jain
Rashi Jain

New Delhi, India



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Hello Everyone. 💖 I am a 17 year old Indian girl who loves to Sing🎤 and write.📃 I love to play Piano.🎹 I am not a professional but Passion hides the flaws. ㈏.. more..

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