Much Awaited Road

Much Awaited Road

A Poem by Rashi Jain
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All about Remembering

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I was on a road,

That I thought would lead me to you,

Stretching my neck to see your sign,

In between those two bent trees,

That was hardly visible from where I was standing,

Not sure if there existed a sign like that.

For my eyes knew their pleasure,

When they used to see yours,

My heart knew it's beats,

When the used to sense yours.

But I then Realized,

It was a dream,

For there was no such road now,

Only a vast barren land,

That carried your dry footprints moving away from me,

For now I know they cannot turn back,

For the soil isn't moist anymore.



© 2017 Rashi Jain



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Rashi Jain
This 16 year old poet awaits your feedback. ❤

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"Much Awaited Road" is a very catchy title you've come up with. Liked the way how lovingly it's penned. The real nice feelings of love are well poured down in this poetry.. along with your heartbeats. Nice imagery. Looking forward to reading your work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

I am so glad you found it like this. :) Thank-you so much. :)
Wórdsmíth

1 Year Ago

Anytime, gurl.



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I loved the title..I loved the way you expressed your emotions..I can feel them as I read the poem..I really loved your imagery...
Keep on writing...

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Months Ago

Thank-you so much ❤
I like the imagery. Very moving. Keep the faith while wandering in the wilderness:-)
Tenth line "they"?

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

5 Months Ago

Thank-you 💕
I adore this, it's full of longing and is beautifully written, keep up the great work :D

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you 💕❤
I was imagining all the lines along with the emos.
Nicely done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you 💕❤
Touching read, beautifully done....enjoyed :) x

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you 💕❤
your thought are really touching the hearts of reader go with this
thanks for sharing this
have a such good every day


Posted 1 Year Ago


Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you for your Review 💕
You are right dear Rashi.
"For now I know they cannot turn back,
For the soil isn't moist anymore."
The above lines are true. After the pain stole away the good memories. You can't go back. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you so much 💕
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Rashi.
There is such sadness when reality becomes only a dream. Hope seems lost. This is a sad one.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you found its essence. Thank-you 💕
You have come with really good combination love and dream in present time

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you 💕
There's a real tragedy in this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you could make out. Thank-you 💕

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Rashi Jain
Rashi Jain

New Delhi, India



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