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When You Break a Writer's Heart

When You Break a Writer's Heart

A Poem by Rashi Jain
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Dedicated to all Writers 💕

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Not blood but words bleed from a Writer's heart,
When it is torn and left without bandages.
The Ink keeps falling on the sheets full of you,
But don't worry, there's ​no name.
The world will never know, it was you.
And that is what she wants.
But everyone will know, there exists someone like you,
And that is what she aims.
For the words written in agony force them
to dive into the light so true.
And the scars heal,
But the pages only turn yellow.
They​ never die.
And so do you,
because of her.

You will regret.
And you will never know why.
And that is the power,
That resides in her agony.
That even if no one will understand,
She will make the world cry.
Because,
You broke a writer's heart.
And her heart is what Everyone loves to read.


© 2017 Rashi Jain



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Rashi Jain
This Seventeen year old Poet Awaits your feedback 💕

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That even if no one will understand,
She will make the world cry. ...

some how reminded me of the line from harry potter.... the one , who must not be named :P
we write and write, hoping to ease that never ending pain... the words we bleed often helps us..
but our memories and love for them live on in our pages , even long after they have left us broken
...life is like that ...we keep searching for that person who we can finally call our home..but i guess till that time the cycle of hurt, love, happiness , sadness goes on...so does our pen in churning out words from our soul for the world to read...

i liked how you have painted this one :) keep writing...

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Month Ago

I love Harry Potter❤
Thankyou so much for your words ❤😊



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Ah..I loved it and it is true..When I am also sad , words are the things that bleed out of my heart..The way you wrote it is indeed worth appreciating..I am also a 17 years old girl from India , same as you and that is the reason that I can relate with you very well...Every line was really beautiful and a truth in my case..I especially loved the last two lines..You expressed your emotions so well in this poem...
Keep on writing...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Month Ago

Thank-you so much ❤
That even if no one will understand,
She will make the world cry. ...

some how reminded me of the line from harry potter.... the one , who must not be named :P
we write and write, hoping to ease that never ending pain... the words we bleed often helps us..
but our memories and love for them live on in our pages , even long after they have left us broken
...life is like that ...we keep searching for that person who we can finally call our home..but i guess till that time the cycle of hurt, love, happiness , sadness goes on...so does our pen in churning out words from our soul for the world to read...

i liked how you have painted this one :) keep writing...

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Month Ago

I love Harry Potter❤
Thankyou so much for your words ❤😊
Excellent! I really liked it. Especially, last two lines - "You broke..., ...Everyone loves to read." Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Month Ago

Thankyou so much❤
I loved this. Got me smiling at the end because it's so true. I always think of karma whenever someone leaves the site because a reviewer broke their writing heart. Anyways, great write. Nice structure, too.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

4 Months Ago

Thank-you 💕
Emotions turn to bow and words to arrow. Nice way to squash it all out.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

8 Months Ago

Yeah ♥ Absolutely.
This is excellent, Rashi. Painful to read due to personal experience, but almost cathartic in a sense. You speak truths here that only us artists can relate to. Those who tear the heart from its seams live forever in our work, long after they've died from our daily routines.

This was awesome to me. Great job, Rashi.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

8 Months Ago

Your comment made my day. Thankyou,♥
Asante

8 Months Ago

My pleasure. ♥
Keep up the good, honest writing.
very Nice and true , love the metaphor u used ..
thank you very much for sharing...

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

8 Months Ago

Thank-you,im glad☯❣
Uday Bhasuthker

8 Months Ago

Most welcome Rashi
Uday Bhasuthker

8 Months Ago

Most welcome Rashi
Well.....i can certainly relate to this write, as can most of us here.

You wrote it truly; we do bleed words on the page us writers and poets. And our gift allows us to tell of our sorrow or our happiness in an eloquent way that mere mortals without the power of the quill cannot possibly fathom.

And as i have discovered, a broken heart is traumatic for the soul but a blessed muse for the poet. For words pour forth endlessly under its throes.

A nice, concisely written piece of work. Well Done.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

8 Months Ago

Thank-you so much ☯♥
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SKY
Rashi you said so much in just few lines. Yes when you broke a writers heart its bleeds and it bleeds words rather than blood. I am the live the example of this case. When she broke my heart, I started writing and now everyone loves to read those words. Strange yet true.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SKY

9 Months Ago

lol no friend. I just loved that girl madly and that's what I know.
Rashi Jain

9 Months Ago

God bless you, Friend. Have a beautiful life❤
SKY

9 Months Ago

Thanks friend and wish 🌠 you the same. Keep smiling :)

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