When You Break a Writer's Heart

When You Break a Writer's Heart

A Poem by Rashi Jain
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Dedicated to all Writers 💕

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Not blood but words bleed from a Writer's heart,
When it is torn and left without bandages.
The Ink keeps falling on the sheets full of you,
But don't worry, there's ​no name.
The world will never know, it was you.
And that is what she wants.
But everyone will know, there exists someone like you,
And that is what she aims.
For the words written in agony force them
to dive into the light so true.
And the scars heal,
But the pages only turn yellow.
They​ never die.
And so do you,
because of her.

You will regret.
And you will never know why.
And that is the power,
That resides in her agony.
That even if no one will understand,
She will make the world cry.
Because,
You broke a writer's heart.
And her heart is what Everyone loves to read.


© 2017 Rashi Jain



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Rashi Jain
This Seventeen year old Poet Awaits your feedback 💕

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You've written such sadness, dark and dark can be.
Your pain shows in so many ways' your emotions veer from incredulity to near loathing. How love can hurt and echo its weeping.

And how much it can work the pen. Love seems to wind the heart's mechanism when it comes to writing. In happiness it sings and dances stanzas galore but with breaks of quiet pleasure and sweet dreams.

But, when love is pitted with pain, marked by deep scars, dawn wakes desperate.. and so forth.. then, the poet can write forever., using those emotions in various measure. See how much i feel after now having read your poem three times, others will feel the same.. tis true.

Posted 5 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

5 Months Ago

A pleasure even though a sad piece of writing. Sadness is so often played with by people til someth.. read more
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Rashi Jain

5 Months Ago

Thanks Much 😊



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This is excellent, Rashi. Painful to read due to personal experience, but almost cathartic in a sense. You speak truths here that only us artists can relate to. Those who tear the heart from its seams live forever in our work, long after they've died from our daily routines.

This was awesome to me. Great job, Rashi.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Week Ago

Your comment made my day. Thankyou,♥
Asante

1 Week Ago

My pleasure. ♥
Keep up the good, honest writing.
very Nice and true , love the metaphor u used ..
thank you very much for sharing...

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Week Ago

Thank-you,im glad☯❣
Uday Bhasuthker

1 Week Ago

Most welcome Rashi
Uday Bhasuthker

1 Week Ago

Most welcome Rashi
Well.....i can certainly relate to this write, as can most of us here.

You wrote it truly; we do bleed words on the page us writers and poets. And our gift allows us to tell of our sorrow or our happiness in an eloquent way that mere mortals without the power of the quill cannot possibly fathom.

And as i have discovered, a broken heart is traumatic for the soul but a blessed muse for the poet. For words pour forth endlessly under its throes.

A nice, concisely written piece of work. Well Done.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Week Ago

Thank-you so much ☯♥
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Sky
Rashi you said so much in just few lines. Yes when you broke a writers heart its bleeds and it bleeds words rather than blood. I am the live the example of this case. When she broke my heart, I started writing and now everyone loves to read those words. Strange yet true.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sky

3 Weeks Ago

lol no friend. I just loved that girl madly and that's what I know.
Rashi Jain

3 Weeks Ago

God bless you, Friend. Have a beautiful life❤
Sky

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks friend and wish 🌠 you the same. Keep smiling :)
This is pain captured on paper.
Which is not an easy thing to do.
Fragile love, hurt, separation.
The writer pens it all.
All except the name who has now been banished.


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

3 Weeks Ago

Yes. 🌹❤ Thank-you for leaving your comment on my poem 💕
A little eviscerating at the start, kind of gave me chills (torn heart reference). But 'words bleed' reminded me of my previous self, when I used to use the same phrases. This poetry is powerful as many others have mentioned; the aestheticity also lies in the way you have assembled the ideas (pages only turn yellow, power residing in her agony, and some other references too). I do not usually talk about the essence but mainly about the structure and basic elements that sets up a poem. And I will have to say this was a good penning from the framework of imagery. Keep it up.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Month Ago

Thank-you ❤💕
so broken like what I am. I saw myself in this poem. one co writer told me, you could only write good poems or should I say great ones if you are the happiest man in the world or much when you are the most broken that like what you wrote "words bleed from a writer's heart" and that "ink is falling on sheets full of you" keep on writing Miss seventeen year-old poet ^^

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Months Ago

Thank-you so much 💜
i left writing poems 2 years back now when i open my account i saw a reading request after reading it , i got a same sense of eerie attitude towards things which once i had in my pocket .now u r going to be a source of my return in this platform u really inspire me to come out of closet again .About poem writers life and words are eternal ,immutable ,ethereal ,and if somebody dares to rob the soul of writers then agony slams his volition via ink steps .so u r a real fighter when it comes to fight with human emotions well constructed and thank u for inspiring me dear :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Months Ago

That's such a beautiful thing. Never stop writing. Thank-you 💕❣
dexterous sam

2 Months Ago

ur welcome ma lady:)
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Zoe
So, so true. You're a fantastic observer. Hope people heed your words and never break a writer's heart. Very well written!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

4 Months Ago

Thank you💕❤
Zoe

4 Months Ago

No problem

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