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When You Break a Writer's Heart

When You Break a Writer's Heart

A Poem by Rashi Jain
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Dedicated to all Writers 💕

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Not blood but words bleed from a Writer's heart,
When it is torn and left without bandages.
The Ink keeps falling on the sheets full of you,
But don't worry, there's ​no name.
The world will never know, it was you.
And that is what she wants.
But everyone will know, there exists someone like you,
And that is what she aims.
For the words written in agony force them
to dive into the light so true.
And the scars heal,
But the pages only turn yellow.
They​ never die.
And so do you,
because of her.

You will regret.
And you will never know why.
And that is the power,
That resides in her agony.
That even if no one will understand,
She will make the world cry.
Because,
You broke a writer's heart.
And her heart is what Everyone loves to read.


© 2017 Rashi Jain



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Rashi Jain
This Seventeen year old Poet Awaits your feedback 💕

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You've written such sadness, dark and dark can be.
Your pain shows in so many ways' your emotions veer from incredulity to near loathing. How love can hurt and echo its weeping.

And how much it can work the pen. Love seems to wind the heart's mechanism when it comes to writing. In happiness it sings and dances stanzas galore but with breaks of quiet pleasure and sweet dreams.

But, when love is pitted with pain, marked by deep scars, dawn wakes desperate.. and so forth.. then, the poet can write forever., using those emotions in various measure. See how much i feel after now having read your poem three times, others will feel the same.. tis true.

Posted 5 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

5 Months Ago

A pleasure even though a sad piece of writing. Sadness is so often played with by people til someth.. read more
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Rashi Jain

5 Months Ago

Thanks Much 😊



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Wow...such painful ending. It strikes deeper in the end. Totally loved this. Got no words to say how touchy this is. Thank you for writing this.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

4 Months Ago

Thank-you so much❤💕
Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

You're welcome. ☺
i love this piece. it's not a basic piece, and it is way moreno mindful. i love how you express the emotion of a writer, it's very true and accurate. especially the part about no one knowing who it's about, always anonymous. i'm so in love with this piece, keep up the great work!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

4 Months Ago

Thank-you so much💕❤
Wow! This is the most beautiful sad poem sad poem I've read this far😊 you've beautiful described, how a writer pours all her writer feeling s on a page when she has a painful love story, and that deep hurt, unsharable with probably no one...And then our pen pen becomes the sword and the pages the most patient assets! We bleed there, we weep there, we cry, we show love, anger, and disgust, and it all stays so secretive until we present that.
Loosing a writer, indeed is a great loss, cause they can cause tears to anybody without even hurting them in person!

Thankyou for sharing your thoughtful poetry, Rashi 😊pat on your back!
You wrote a masterpiece and made all us writers proud 💕

-Saumya.



Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

5 Months Ago

I was smiling all the time while reading your review.
This means so much to me.
Thank-.. read more
Saumya

5 Months Ago

You're most welcome, Rashi!😊
We often read about heartbreak from those mercilessly dumped by the “one” and left for dead on the side of the proverbial highway of love. These stories/poems seem to be everywhere; there's no lack of verbiage surrounding the disappointments of having your heart broken. I also found your write heart-rending, yet interesting, in your perspective of the subject matter! Good write …. :-)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

5 Months Ago

Thank-you 💕❤
You've written such sadness, dark and dark can be.
Your pain shows in so many ways' your emotions veer from incredulity to near loathing. How love can hurt and echo its weeping.

And how much it can work the pen. Love seems to wind the heart's mechanism when it comes to writing. In happiness it sings and dances stanzas galore but with breaks of quiet pleasure and sweet dreams.

But, when love is pitted with pain, marked by deep scars, dawn wakes desperate.. and so forth.. then, the poet can write forever., using those emotions in various measure. See how much i feel after now having read your poem three times, others will feel the same.. tis true.

Posted 5 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

5 Months Ago

A pleasure even though a sad piece of writing. Sadness is so often played with by people til someth.. read more
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Rashi Jain

5 Months Ago

Thanks Much 😊
Wow! This is an impressive write, actually the way you wrote was really expressive! Nicely written, Keep writing!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

5 Months Ago

Thank-you ❤💕
Very true. There is pieces of a writer in everything or she writes. Well written

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

5 Months Ago

Thank-you 💕❤
rashi Jain every word is true... honest beautifully written and yes poets are one who keeps the persons alive...💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

5 Months Ago

Thank-you 💋💕
You are right rashi and just explore how writer feels when it hurts and other thing is that words are speaks about that writer emotions

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

5 Months Ago

Thank-you 💋💕
Oh dear...I really enjoyed your words..whenever we are hurt we do portray our emotions on paper..and really you deserve appreciation for this poem..

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

5 Months Ago

Thankyou so much 💕❤
Priyanshi

5 Months Ago

My pleasure, Rashi

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New Delhi, India



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