You are the Ocean King

You are the Ocean King

A Poem by Rashi Jain
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You are the Ocean King
And I am the Forest Queen.
Let's make the world old.
Let's make the world Whole.
Let the only two strengths
fall in love,
And let them merge,
And do what one never imagined
Never predicted,
Show them,
What we together look like.
The power of ocean and the Power of Woods.
That will leave them with unforgettable visions
For they will be the purest
And the most elegant
One’s eyes will see.
I know,
we will be.
But let it happen.
Let me melt in you and
I will let you melt in me.
And the World will be one.
With Love all around and
Love will be
What one will see.

© 2017 Rashi Jain



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Rashi Jain
This Seventeen Year Old Poet Awaits your feedback 💕❤

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Ah..I loved it..Specially the line -let me melt in you and I will let you melt in me..I loved the title and the way you said You are ocean king and I am the forest queen..It felt like divine love..You know you can start writing songs for films because your poems are so well written and they are so romantic...Though your poems are short but yet they are so sweet that they leave a long lasting impression on the reader which even poem consisting of many stanzas can't..I loved this poem..You are a great poet indeed...


Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

3 Days Ago

Thank-you so much❤ You are making my day with your every review❤



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Ah..I loved it..Specially the line -let me melt in you and I will let you melt in me..I loved the title and the way you said You are ocean king and I am the forest queen..It felt like divine love..You know you can start writing songs for films because your poems are so well written and they are so romantic...Though your poems are short but yet they are so sweet that they leave a long lasting impression on the reader which even poem consisting of many stanzas can't..I loved this poem..You are a great poet indeed...


Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

3 Days Ago

Thank-you so much❤ You are making my day with your every review❤
Much like flash point paradox movie in which aquaman falls in love with wonderwoman... Great great stuff.. Let me melt in you and I will let you melt in me.. My favourite

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

7 Months Ago

Thank-you ♥☯
Awesome creation of poem that defines value of ocean and forest which creates beauty together

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you❤💕
Hmm, nice job. The capitalizations would make more sense if they were consistent, but other than that, great work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you. I will take care 😊
Wow! It's so beautiful and nice..loved the short yet sweet lines..will be waiting to read more of your works :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you 💕❤
Sofia

1 Year Ago

You're most welcome :)
very talented. don't waste it here.
try to give a music to your poem and sing and record. It will be hit in YouTube.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you so much.
I will definitely try😉❤
Abraham George

1 Year Ago

after uploading please make sure that you share that link here for me.
Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

That would be so nice..
My pleasure ❤💕
A beautiful poem, Rashi.
the title is a good one, loved it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank you Priyanshi ❤😉
Priyanshi

1 Year Ago

My pleasure.
Very uplifting. Sometimes old bitter poets like myself need to read pieces like this :)

The "oneness" reminds me of hindu/zen oneness, a sorta erotic mysticism.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

I'm glad to know.
Thank-you so much 💕❤

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Rashi Jain
Rashi Jain

New Delhi, India



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