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A Poem by rashu
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Is black fine or I need white,

Am I a dark lover or I crave for light?

Basically I m so confused to decide,

What I need and where I reside?


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Dreams are never reality,
They need to be transformed.
Challenges are never easy,
They have to be faced,
Life is never beautiful,

It needs to be lived and made.


© 2015 rashu



Author's Note

rashu
just took pen after a long and this is what i crumbled..

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you do not lack at all only a only with this two poems, two titles
even one word picked from out of your poem would be fine enough
my friend and may I within your author's note that it, itself
gave me a nice picture in my mind, something that was about get chucked
and then you had a second look. at the footnote I would have used a word
like this one... after a-while instead of after a long, awhile and crumbled
will work together well within that big thought a little poem exsist

Posted 2 Years Ago


You say life is never beautiful because you have not decided to live in light. When you are in darkness nothing is beautiful because nothing can be seen. In light everything can be seen, including beauty. Life needs to be lived and made beautiful but you can't because you have not yet decided if you live in light or darkness. A nice delimma.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I thought there were grammatical errors, initially, but then I changed my mind.. The philosophy underpinning the text I share: there's what we need and then how we day-to-day feel (being the former is rarely easy, as it means displacing ourselves from our hearts.)


Lovely expression.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I can notice the words of true wisdom and genuine efforts to lead a meaningful life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I liked the first part, that's ambiguity is what I love... that sweet confusion of where we belong?

Posted 2 Years Ago


beautiful thoughts...........!!!!
i liked it!!
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


rashu

2 Years Ago

thanks dear
Pushkar Prabhat

2 Years Ago

you are welcome!!! :) :)

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Added on January 25, 2015
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Tags: confusion, life, beauty

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rashu
rashu

haldwani, nainital, India



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i love writing poems basically ...but i write stories also ..my writings maybe not perfect but i know they r direct from my heart and about the thiings i see and i relate ..what i feel is writing poem.. more..

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