Birth of the great poetry

This is all about Afro-Asian poetry =)

 

A land of lost treasure 
A place full of pleasure
The birth of great poetry

It travels in big journey

The moon starts to rise
The sun starts to hide
The stars smiles so bright
The skies stands "till night

A life full of tragic 
Then sing a song full of magic
Feel the love in your heart
Seek the freedom through an art

Imagine the art of Africa's poetry
Dream for the art of Asia's poetry
Now sit under a tree 
Read And feel free

Author's Note

Well, this is my first poem i hope you all like it please comment especially regarding to my grammar thnx =)

Reviews

[Malark]

Very fun to read! Definitely worth the Badge of Wonder. Such a well written piece that displays the emotion and magic poetry can capture and produce. I look forward to seeing you enter more of my contests!

[rcb@urservice]

Thnx ^____^


I really love that you like it, thnx again =)