Pretty

Pretty

A Poem by Mr Alednac
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It drives me crazy,
to see the different colors.
She's Pretty, groovy. 

© 2012 Mr Alednac



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This is cute. Simple.

Posted 9 Months Ago


I like this short, "haiku" sort've type of format you're going for. Almost speaks more volumes than a long poem. I like it!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr Alednac

9 Months Ago

Why Thank You Stormy :)
Thank you very much, and I'm glad you liked it!
Rainbows are cool... always good to see.

*bird*

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr Alednac

9 Months Ago

They certainly are. Thank you for the review!

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Mr Alednac
Mr Alednac

Wasco, CA



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LIQUID!!! LIQUID!!!

A Poem by Mr Alednac