Extentions eternal Drift

Alive in the Stream' sequel: Words & Andi Starr brilliance, remind. Consciousness..

Extensions 

 

eternal

 

Drift

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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As on going collaborative creativity, hides

currents on the surge, of Rip Tides.

Beyond, splendour this mystic path. Unfold...

spark and pop, as worlds. Collide

with inner dimensions, behind doors. Slide

into fragments, of fear. Put aside.

Future consideration. Differing moods, expressed.

An ideal. Garnered, at Oceans View.

Over head, in evening. The Ebb & Flow, wonder dressed.

Images impressed. In now, a mind.

Obsessed reasoned, point of view. Look. See purpose,

gather or rather, gained. Stars shine...

Down, on Mankind.

Gaze to the heavens, what do you see. Become evident.

As Angels, breath. Wonder. He shudder.

The pen to paper, where inspiration reside. Extensions,

to inner dimensions. Behind a door, hides.

That view, a gift... eternal drift. With, his Ocean Guide.

Such said, wonder, Quill an Quiver. The line...

To warble. Like the Whippoorwill.

Sang harmony, to his soul. Extensions, expand the breast.

Space & Time... no time. To rest.

Upon the knoll, Eternity. Mother shed tears, waves crest.

To pound, the shore. Outside his door.

Behind the fears, urgency. A nightingale. Soothe, once more.

With a flutter, of wings.

He lay the pen to rest, put away the tools. Knowing time,

with his spirit. Need not contend, dilemma...

As his heart, was whole. To walk out that door, and join again.

Worlds without end, where his love unfolds.

On a beach, under the shimmer. Sounds of Boundless Blend.

The surf... at Rip Tide.

He sob.

The feel of Inspiration. Sent... intended. Extensions of Oceans View.

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I ponder the Edges of The Universe an Shiver...

To know, nothingness...

 

 

I Eternally Drift.

Author's Note

More of a classical stanza type format adhered to in unfolding this one, with
a slight wondering. My style in flow I guess and, no classical training to speak of.
--- Just years, of loving the space. Named Poetry...
Striving to relate Those inner dimensions, and doors. That open an close... Intermittently. I feel content as such, are things that most every one.
Engage in feeling... upon the deep occasionals, time spent. Alone with the
endless expanse of the Universe... pondered.
What do you think?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing and powerful use of words and thoughts.
"He lay the pen to rest, put away the tools. Knowing time,
with his spirit. Need not contend, dilemma...
As his heart, was whole. To walk out that door, and join again.
Worlds without end, where his love unfolds.
On a beach, under the shimmer. Sounds of Boundless Blend."
The above lines could stand alone. Writers write what they see and what they know. Sometimes writers see dead-end and no salvation. I enjoyed this poem my friend.
Coyote

[Wolfwind]

I really loved the soft yet descriptive flow to the ink. It came across to me as if the first part was a child looking to the heavens imagining they were an astronaut looking down upon Earth, and then it transitions to where the child has grown and then sit looking out over the waves of the ocean blue and ponders how both are his loves, for they are the great unknowns.

Beautiful Ink!
Aaron =)

[carol burgess romance]

Your words send my thoughts spining in so many directions.....inspiration in the air we breathe unfolding to release pen to paper...a breathless read indeed....to write for me also is a release and food for my spirit....enjoyed this so very much

[sharonlee]

Thoroughly enjoying the passionate style here... opens doorways of thought... invites inspiration.

[Trisha]

you are such a talented writer. I love the pictures you added as well. I think its amazing how you can paint a picture in the readers mind of a place I would love to be. Very powerful my new friend.

[Tate Morgan]

This is one of the best things you have written as far as I am concerned

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Just beautiful words.. .and lovely thoughts..

Chloe

[HorrorMaster]

Very good poem. I love the pictures of this and your style of writing is very good.

[Shalini Dinesh (Poet's ..]

This is really amazing, the style of writing, the punctuations and the choice of words are all too good, i think i need to learn them... Very well written.