A Cross to Bare

A Cross to Bare

A Poem by Rory CJ Frankson
"

Inspiration from reading Poppysilver ...a Writer of Merit...

"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Standing delivered, reaching. For a never ending dream
surreal is the appeal salvation, as reality. Screams
shell shocked. To find the path revealed, sealed
there is no way out, no repentance pealed
our perception back, to unlikely scenes
played out. This passion plays remorse
of course, of course I see only me
standing at its shore forelorn, I
long to know more... no more
tis blinding, this revealed.
To read and ponder the everlonger and feel, through that. Which is seen.

Projected, for the eternal soul. Spirit rides, the seventh tide....
and I shiver...
[The grave can wait]


© 2011 Rory CJ Frankson



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

And such inspiration indeed, Rory. What a vastness to your words.. taking us across life.. the dreams unfulfilled.. the days yet to come.. Reaching for more, there is a sense of loneliness here.. longing... What a wondrous flow and form you've given this piece, and then flooded it with brilliant imagery and depth!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
.
that's so powerful...searching for enlightment..loved this..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is terrific.
"Projected, for the eternal soul. Spirit rides, the seventh tide....
and I shiver..."
amazing...
time to tune into DT n "the Spirit Carries on..."

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

When I read this, I could only think of the book of revelation, from the bible.
something which is coming, which will be delivered by the seven angels. The end of life as we know it.
Our inner soul wishes for salvation and we want to know all the answers to this mystery, and at the same time we fear it.
Of course this is how I read your piece, which is great.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful !!!!!!written

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the words you use are powerful...it has such depth...its really great


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really amazing! I love it and the form is great and ugh! I love it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You seem able to make poetry in any formation like a magician

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes I think I would have been better off remaining ignorant, and then I think what an awful waste of life that would be.
I like the way this poem feels like a thoughtstream.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love your style of writing , a joy to read.

Freeman



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece rivals those of Frost. Very well written.

This passion plays remorse
of course, of course I see only me
standing at its shore forelorn, I
long to know more... no more
tis blinding, this revealed.

amazing! 100 daisies!


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

832 Views
14 Reviews
Rating
Added on October 6, 2010
Last Updated on February 26, 2011
Tags: philosophical, blinding faith, the grave, life trials

Author

Rory CJ Frankson
Rory CJ Frankson

Vernon, British Colombia, Canada



About
It's all about the music really. I'm a Writer / Musician. Write On / Right On! Peace... Romon in Review Out Post & Creative Standard Productions. Romonx Associated Artists Rory CJ Frankson .. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Deeper Deeper

A Poem by Robin


Songs of Colour Songs of Colour

A Poem by OT