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A Decaying Love

A Decaying Love

A Poem by Elizabeth Mars

Ravishing nightmares

But they were just moldy dreams

Fresh ecstasy

Forms a new reality


A matted mirage

Of luminescent thoughts

A naive little heart

And her dream starts to rot


Dehydrated lover

Tears her innocent heart

Broken little girl

Her utopia torn apart


Velvety love is not what is seems

No hero in white, she holds no belief


No longer persuaded by these plastic fantasies

And the man dressed in white with a trick up his sleeve



© 2018 Elizabeth Mars



Author's Note

Elizabeth Mars
Just a little something I had to write for class, let me know what lines you enjoyed and what ones I could do without :)

Thanks a million!

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Wow Elizabeth, Enjoyed every word line etc I don't think i am capable of telling you what to leave out, i'll leave that for you. Love your descriptive words really creative and classy and captivating to read. That's a master class for me Truly enjoyed

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elizabeth Mars

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much!



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Wow Elizabeth, Enjoyed every word line etc I don't think i am capable of telling you what to leave out, i'll leave that for you. Love your descriptive words really creative and classy and captivating to read. That's a master class for me Truly enjoyed

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elizabeth Mars

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
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Jas
I love every word, beautifully put and sums up how most people change once love and fantasy daydreams are separated.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Elizabeth Mars

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
the bad side of love,the pain

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Elizabeth Mars

6 Months Ago

yep! That's what I'm going for

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Added on February 12, 2018
Last Updated on February 12, 2018
Tags: love, rhyming, poetry

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