To Fast

To Fast

A Poem by Punk rocker

Slow down, slow down

to fast I am going.

Can't think.

 

No more pedal to the metal.

Take your foot of the gas.

Hose down the rubber.

 

What I have I missed in this life long race.

Friends I have lost.

School I have quit.

Love I have gave up on.

 

Why have I done this, just to keep myself from getting hurt.

 

Now it is time to slow down.

New freinds I have made.

School I have come again, but love must wait until I see him again.

 

But it will come why because I have slowed down. 

© 2010 Punk rocker


Author's Note

Punk rocker
I am not sure if this poem is very good so please comment.

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I liked this. There were spots where the lines got choppy but other than that I liked this poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


very good! love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is very, very good. No doubt about it. Well done :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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