Can't slow me down

I know I have a poem called too fast but i can't control the title of my poems............ ok maybe i can

I go by fast,

leaving dust in my tracks.

Hair in my face, only helps me win the race.

 

Holes in the ground,

only gets me closer to the crown.

Bombs in the lane,

don't get in my way.

 

You might try to slow me dowm,

but you,ll fail.

Because................

you can't slow me down.

Reviews

[Taylor H.]

This has some typos but for the most part I really enjoyed this. Why can't you write your books the same way you write your poems? (Beautifully). Wonderful poem.

[azlamalo]

love the sound of it

[Michael X]

this reads in a metaphorical fast pace, especially with the opening lines, the imagery gets the readers mind racing, and pondering at the same time
on the meaning, awsome imagery keep up the great work.