your no one elses

your no one elses

A Poem by alexa

things change in your life

but your the only one that can fix you life

 no one else only you

 dont blame no other person for you mistakes

 they are your fault no one elses

© 2010 alexa


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your = possession
you're = contraction for "you are"

Small mistakes like this can really take away from a piece. Makes the reader stumble or it completely turns them off.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Joe
This is a good poem. It's short and simple, putting its message out there and not hiding behind some cheap metaphors. Great job! keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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