Revenge

This was fun to write, hopefully whoever read it will enjoy.

Say hello to her message
Say goodbye to her thoughts
Don’t go away too fast
Or she will just capture you within a breath


Oh sweet revenge, how it taste oh so cold, never mind the controlled
Oh my sweet revenge, how it taste oh so old, never mind the foretold


Can you see her dance?
She just throws sweet kisses from her lips
She can’t even be bothered to give in
But can you see how it will end?


Oh sweet revenge, how it taste oh so cold, never mind the controlled
Oh my sweet revenge, how it taste oh so old, never mind the foretold


Her sweet little twist will only confuse the missed
She will always have her way in the end
Can’t say I condone
But at least I have this


Oh sweet revenge, how it taste oh so cold, never mind the controlled
Oh my sweet revenge, how it taste oh so old, never mind the foretold


I said hello to her... she just said go away
I said goodbye to her... she just said there is no way


Oh how I needed, oh how I pleaded
She just said go away
Oh how I mended my thoughts
She just said there will never be a way
But I still have...
I still have...


I still have my sweet revenge, how it taste oh so cold, never mind the controlled
I will always have my sweet revenge, how it taste oh so old, never mind the foretold


NO!
Should have been
Could have been
But never was


NO!
Would have been
Might have been
But never was


Oh my sweet revenge

Reviews

[Nami Machae]

wow, very nice write. I hope I get to read more from you.

[KatDarkness]

That is just beautiful! In a revenge-seeking, insanely cool way :) I liked the how some of the lenghts of the lines varied, making the slow of the poem really good. Great work!

[Matthew]

Thank you for the comment. You got the meaning of it pretty much :)