The Rant Of Epiphonies.

in a nutshell, i'm 20 and having realizations as i should. but there's something different about me. i see deep, then a little deeper, then i study for weeks. i embrace it.

I don't believe the world is ready to hear
The reality I see from an uncensored stance
Either the sensation won't match my words
Or simpletons won't even give me a chance

I see a world of hate, lies, and selfish reason
We all really believe ignorance is at all bliss
We use it to justify laughing at the absent
And smiling at return as if they were missed

I see people who learn how to not care
Switching from love to a must be cold
They learn, work, and forget how at all
And raise a daughter who's body is sold

I see people speaking of other ones lives
Adding tones that suggest disgust or awe
If not that, it's how they're interested at all
But never judge themselves as they are raw

I see myself fearing my words right now
Because only I know I've been on every point
I write because I'm a wealthy naive of Chicago
And I've dreamed of sleeping indoors in Detroit

I see misunderstanding to the most simple
To understand that we don't understand
The same experience will never be the same
Our minds create such different first hands

I see ourselves tearing ourselves apart
By this, I mean one to one, then one alone
The scold to whatever someone has done
Regurgitates, repeats, another cries at home

I see cycles, but so few learn to escape
Those who do aren't necessarily aware why
On the surface, they learned the right ways
And find it enough to have detoured eyes

I see harsh words trying to tell me I'm lost
And I can confidently tell them we all are
If love were true and no one knew otherwise
We'd never need to learn it through a scar

I see selfishness and hypocrites as defined
I see no change, just labels of b***h or a*****e
I see people rushing people til they won't start
Love me, love yourself, never doubt what you know

Reviews

[John Stussy]

Whoops, I read the rant of epiphanies. I would beg for forgiveness, except I don't beg, and it ended up being very much worth reading. You've described an incredibly honest point of view of how the world is, there are no bounds to its ugliness. Foolishness lies in all, hate is more common in the hearts of man than love, and every person has their own agenda to gain for themselves, even if they trample on others. This was stark, brilliant and honestly written. Great work with this poem, these are words that ought to be read, words that call out humanity and flaunts its faults.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

you really think so? i just feel myself starting to question love, honesty, and loyalty to the point of actually asking myself "should i work on not caring anymore?" and thats when i snapped. i think thats the dumbest thing i've ever asked myself.

[John Stussy]

Well, I've questioned it and the answers have just made me an insanely bitter person, so maybe it's best to not delve too deeply into those questions. I still really liked this poem.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

i'm just going to keep on being the change i wanna see. thanks for the review(: i was on the fence with this one.

[John Stussy]

Best way to cause change is to make it yourself, be strong and I wish you the best of luck. :)

[Eternal Poet]

Nice to see a different perspective! Great writing!

[Steve]

You have an interesting perspective of the world and a positive, naïve way about you I see....

[admiralkurtz]

I can really see the power and emotion in these words. You held the character of a great speaker that has captivated their audience with the power of literature. You cannot fight against this piece and the path it takes you down.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

thanks.

[admiralkurtz]

It's just the truth, no need for thanks

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

You have a moral inquiry that colors all your writes, your interest in ethics and idealism is very clear and part of your mission in life I believe.

Does this make sense to your inner self?

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

quite(: and you are spot on about me! ha very nice! thanks for the reviews!

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I'm glad to hear it!

[Silvario]

Quite the rant indeed! You deliver many clear and significant messages in this well "spoken", well constructed piece.
I've noticed how much raw emotion and unhindered honesty comes thru in your work. Very impressive :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i see this too...i don't like how society has changed...i don't feel i fit anymore...

people are just too self-absorbed..

these are harsh words, but very true words...

so well penned..an insightful read.

jacob

[gombeggar]

well done expression...good poem...i hd to read it a few times to take i all in...now make sure to see both sides of the coin cuz they always exist out there in the world even if u may need to look a little harder for one or the other

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

its the hardest, most considerate thing i think we can do for eachother. thanks for really going outta your way to understand it. it is a lot of information that people dont really think about.

[gombeggar]

there are plenty of things that people don't think enuff about, tons really

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

i'm not one of them, thankfully lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You put a lot of philosophical thinking into your work. Life is a never ending learning experience and the smartest people are the ones who know they still have things to learn. Touching on a couple things that your poem made me think about... this world is full of ignorance, people finding shallow things to bring them false happiness instead of working to find true happiness... I think that is why reality TV is so popular. I also agree you have to love yourself and believe in yourself, that is why if you do not stick to your ideals you lose yourself.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

i live to come at every situation around me, mine or not, from every angle. i'm only 20 and have been through more than most 30 year olds, kinda crazy but thats why God gave me the brain he did(: i dont see people who dont do anything about themselves or their happiness b.c i dont really care if theyre happy honestly. its when they spread it to people who otherwise wouldnt be negative that i begin to care. then they see what they do and theyre just ignoring it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I try to avoid negative people cause I know if you are around it long enough it can rub off on you with realizing it... negativity is like a disease.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

my trick is to never speak unless im smiling, even if i dont want to. fake two smiles a day for 10 real ones seems worth it to me to not be one of those people who contaminates the ones not yet aware that some people have ninja negativity skills. lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is very sound advice.

Ninja negativity skills... LOL I like that.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh yes I have read and reviewed this... but it never hurts to read it again.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

haha, i thought you did(; i didnt really look through the comments before sending it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is okay... I do not mind at all. Send anything you like :)

[soliloquy]

Ok. I had to read this a few times to get the meanings/wisdom contained.

You are thinker!

And you seem to understand human nature. :0)

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

indeed i am a thinker. you took this serious enough to really understand, thank you!

[soliloquy]

I did. It was real and a little sad in places but indeed thoughtful.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

some are personal, some are just observed. all important(:

[kimmy]

This is such an eye opener for most..You have came out with honest words and talking of the heart and hurt. I There is to much heartache out there already and there doesn't need anymore, yet we find it on our own porch. Thanks for sharing this, it was a great poem, flowed great, and held so much honest :)

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

thank you. i was unsure about it but i had to get it out(:

[kimmy]

I am glad that you did, I have been hurt so many times..I think it is just easier to be by myself sometimes and forget love because all it does is bring heartache :(

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

forgetting love is what gets me irate. whoever did that to you is better of missing out on the amazing love you have that someone else deserves.

[kimmy]

You are right about that, when I do try to date they all end up saying "What happened to you? You just can't do it can you? You are ruined thanks to one A******." I feel bad, but it is hard to let your heart open up like that again.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

use your bluntness, youre really great at that. tell them whats up, and dont do anything youre not ready for. ever. its screwed me over a lot too.

[kimmy]

Yup, that is what I do..lol..I am not sure but there is one thing I do know my mom and grandmother have taught me to have back bone and if someone don't like it, oh well :)
Sorry waiting on place to bring my washer and dryer :)

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

lol they sound like they get it(: message my inbox.