Found into the wild

Found into the wild

A Poem by Sriparna
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A poem dedicated to Kashmir, you will always be special to me. Written while had a halt near a park in pahalgam, as I was a bit ill, stayed inside the car. Glad.

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Where the sun kissed the mountains,
I found bliss in wind,
I awed at the jewelle in the river water,
I found my destination before I reach my home,
I found smiles in thirsty faces,
I found warmth in cold hands,
I found beauty in struggle and journey,
I felt each signs of life on earth.
When the river flew with its grace,
I found my lost dream,
I realized how firm the earth beneath my feet is,
How the flowers got the colours from the mother earth,
How the folk song created the symphony,
I learned adventure in unexpected and uncertainty,
In the chirps
and in the tranquility of the wild,
I lost and discovered myself.

© 2017 Sriparna



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From my seat, it's you talking to the reader about what YOU found, without making the reader know it as you do. Facts, in other words, instead of inviting the reader to be an emotional participant. In the end, while we've learned that an unknown person was confused, but is okay now, why not take the reader on the journey? Why not make the reader know what triggered the finding? Why not entertain instead of informing?



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For me this suggests your emotions, your recollections, of what is now invisible.. the rich past has faded. But in turn, that strengthens your memories, makes them more valuable, more precious. I feel a little bewildered but found your words sadly expressive.

Posted 2 Days Ago


That's the true beauty of 'heaven on earth'. Now i want to visit this serenity too. I am still lost in translation so maybe i will find my self too. The piece depicts how you feel and realized in nature's vicinity. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Your poem is really good and you explained it very beautifully with really heart touching words. Thank for sharing..keep it up.... ; )

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sriparna

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for the kind words. :)
From my seat, it's you talking to the reader about what YOU found, without making the reader know it as you do. Facts, in other words, instead of inviting the reader to be an emotional participant. In the end, while we've learned that an unknown person was confused, but is okay now, why not take the reader on the journey? Why not make the reader know what triggered the finding? Why not entertain instead of informing?



Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful journey in the words. I did enjoy the trip in thoughts. You allowed the reader to come alone with you to discover. What is truly important. Thank you Sriparna for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sriparna

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

You are welcome.

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Sriparna
Sriparna

Kolkata, Humanism, India



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