to justin and camille, after their wedding

to justin and camille, after their wedding

A Poem by recantichize

dear friends,
i wanted to hear
the vows that you whispered
into each others hearts, 
to see the joy tears dripping
on burning cheeks
and to witness your first
legally bound kiss
but there were two petals,
purple and white,
that were doing their own
dance interpretation
of your love,
and they held
my attention fast.

© 2012 recantichize



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friendship can be the best relation between two or more persons who are not connected by blood. but this depends on how much each one is honest to the others. in this poem, you could simply draw a very unique image about sincere honest friendship. i have really enjoyed it

Posted 5 Years Ago


ok.....this is going to sound stupid....but what is the purple and white petal thing?

Sorry....i like to know!

Posted 5 Years Ago


This piece reflects intense emotion; is infused with loving empathy.
A skillfully created poem, r--one whose tender sentiments would be treasured to commemorate any wedding.
Wonderful!


Posted 5 Years Ago


Oh, ghost writer saw something different than I did... I read mystery and found myself captivated by it. How interesting!

Posted 5 Years Ago


how deliciously sentimental..such a special bond shared with so many, somehow you managed to capture the intimacy ..lovely

Posted 5 Years Ago



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recantichize
recantichize

denton, TX



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A Poem by recantichize