practice

fricatives and vowel sounds

as ribs are plucked and strummed

contralto sighs in coerced gasps

pressure

flutter 

   flick

each touch effects a resonance

from the instrument

that only you can play.

Reviews

[Chris]

Teasingly sighs in most effactive ways...

[Ed Hart]

and the rest of us are lined up at the bar trading tears because we never learned to read music

[LJW]

Unique and well written.

[Steven]

This is sex.

[Sweets]

This is really great !
Flows really well and very creative =)

[ghost writer]

wonderful use of metaphor! The heart is the most difficult instrument to play..

[Just Another Writer]

This is really great! I agree with previous reviews in that the flow is marvelous. It's so.. effortless feeling, and you didn't need rhymes to make it that way. Great word choice and imagery as well. This piece will keep me thinking the rest of the night!

[Cathy Wattam]

I love this. Interesting topic and flow. You do have a very keen sense of inner knowing. Fab-u-lous.

[joshua deathdealer]

Refreshing and I like the structure. Nice work.

[khalid]

very simple but at the same time very sensual. i enjoyed reading it