Bi

Bi

A Poem by redalia
"

for a homophobe, most likely

"

I like my tea with milk

and my sheets silk

I like earthy scents 

and flowery sweat


so

paint me confused


frame me,

whatever


just because 

your cookie cutter 

doesn’t go through this dough 

you kick about


pray

rob me 

of your ignorance


go 

wallow

in your own lone hole


© 2017 redalia



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Hahaha
I like your introductory confidence in your personal taste and your apathic "tell off" of the other's refusal/ignorance
I feel exactly like this sometimes
Thanks for sharing this poem of yours:)
It's a great one, as usual

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redalia

1 Week Ago

thank you so much! writing is a great way to let off some steam. i'm happy it was relatable to you!
OK. I'm so glad you reviewed one of mine because it led me to yours... Your economy of words, the punch of emotion, I can feel the spat irritation. This is my favourite of yours (so far) xx

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redalia

3 Weeks Ago

thank you for reading and leaving a review, i really appreciate it. the irritation is key here, i'm .. read more
ashkat

3 Weeks Ago

You too! 😊
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I love it! I can feel your anger for those ignorant people.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redalia

1 Month Ago

happy to hear that, thank you!!
Loved the imagery with the cookie cutter. A personal and therefore powerful piece.
- George

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redalia

1 Month Ago

thank you, i appreciate the comment, George!

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Added on December 15, 2017
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Tags: gay, lgbt