Dear Time... I Miss You.

Dear Time... I Miss You.

A Poem by Red Rose

confessions of a 15 year old. written last year.


It's hitting me. I'm getting old.
I'm turning 16 next month.
I'm getting my drivers license soon.
I've taken the ACT for the first time.
The kids I babysit call me "ma'am".
...and worst of all-
My previously lime green walls are now beige.

Time soars.

© 2010 Red Rose

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Very funny. Nice to see humorous poems which don't get posted often.

Posted 2 Years Ago

lol! nice

Posted 8 Years Ago

I laughed at this - very cute, sweet and short. I actually think you could do without the "Time soars" line at the end. While this line might feel a little more conclusive, or whatnot, I feel that it interrupts the kind of thoughts the writer is trying to convey.
//...and worst of all-
My previously lime green walls are now beige.//
Besides, the above two lines were by far my favourite - it would be an interesting little remark to end the poem with.
Overall, nothing spectacular or revolutionary, but sweetly written.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Absolutely wonderful.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Haha that was cute:)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Ha ha this one make me laugh.

Good write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on March 9, 2010
Last Updated on March 9, 2010


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