POEM 40 (Silence)

POEM 40 (Silence)

A Poem by redzone
"

….the silence of touch

"

POEM 40 (Silence)

 

I love the wild silence heard

as the Aspen whisper to Cedars

in the early morn.

It’s a love sonnet

written on a summer breeze

as it tickles rustling leaves.

 

It reminds me

of the goose bump silence

stealing my breath

when you touch me.

 

Aztec Warrior 8.24.15

© 2019 redzone


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redzone
....thanks for reading...

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Lovely concepts captured as you enjoy the silence. Something we should all appreciate much more.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Damn! I wish I'd been the one to write that opening line about Aspen & Cedars whispering! This is a fresh impactful poem. Usually I go for the longer ones, but you've packed a perfect punch here. The relationship between stanza 1 meaning & stanza 2 meaning is perfectly bridged with grace (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


Red,
Great piece. Nature meets our nature. Thanks
T.

Posted 1 Month Ago


this is wonderful....and i beg to differ..i like the oxymoron of the wild silence...but if we are quiet, there is something to hear...the rustling leaves of the trees speaking to one another...
a song many never hear because they just refuse to listen.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago



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