she got me

a poem about how our special someone has our hearts

Author's Note

She got me like a cold flu
All I need is her fuck the rest of you
She my all, my world, my boo
Wouldn't trade her for the world
She gon be having my baby matter fact its a girl
We getting married today or maybe next year
Don't matter to me as long as she still here
If I die today I promise her always to protect her
She is my angel
I am her knight
For her love I will always fight
This love may not be understood by some, but some might
Now I ask one question to the one I love
Will you please lay with me tonight and float to the heavens above

Reviews

[Babe Roxx]

I enjoyed the emotions in your write...raw and street...I'm thinking you do spoken words...I know, I use to perform many moons ago...you have talent and my advice is to read more, to harness your emotions and improve your skills, not saying to change your essence...just to be polished.

The reason I enjoyed your poem...the love and joy you share with your special someone...it truly emanates through your words...Thank you for sharing.

[Cheef Rockah]

This poem was a while ago a gud yr or so ago n i hav improved since then it in sum sense is a rap n i hav com out with better ones other than that this poem again is old sooo a lot of things hav changed thanks again though

[taboo.poet]

Aww this is really sweet. A couple of the rhymes were off, but other than that it was really good and I enjoyed it a lot. As Everette DeValle said, it's very street and raw, almost as if it could be a rap. Keep it up :)
&&This is obviously a very special woman. I hope everything works out ^^