Seemingly Not What It Seems

Seemingly Not What It Seems

A Poem by revalatia

Living each day  

               by sight unseen

While constantly pondering

                what it all means

But if things aren't always

                what they seem

Perhaps my life is lived

                 through dreams.


© 2017 revalatia



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I agree life is lived through dreams. Hell is created when we awake from our dreams.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


I'm speechless! It's so good. It's short but it is just amazing! I liked the message! Such a small but meaningful poem!

Posted 10 Months Ago


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I have no words.......my voice is in my awe!!!!!!!!!

(I do have a question, though: is there a reason for the two "by"'s or is that a typo? for the musicality, which is absolutely stupendous is a tad marred by the presence of the two of them......also it's a bit redundant).

Well done!

Posted 11 Months Ago


revalatia

11 Months Ago

thank you. I didn't even realize it. Awesome reviews. Thank you very much!
emipoemi

11 Months Ago

With pleasure.
Maybe we all are but a dream, in this crazy, whacked out world we think of as ours. It's really not that surprising that so many feel this way, when we see what reality throws up at us so often. The phrase "truth is stranger than fiction" springs to mind.
Nicely captured in so few words. The thought lingers long after being read and resonates in our minds.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on November 5, 2016
Last Updated on June 26, 2017

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revalatia
revalatia

Azusa, CA



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Thoughts in motion..words spiraling inside me.. more to come.................................later....In the meantime.. My own moment of clarity.. was realizing repeating the same mistakes over and ov.. more..

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Beeware.. Beeware..

A Poem by revalatia



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