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From the passion

From the passion

A Poem by revalatia
"

The way he makes me feel

"

Cultivating curiosities composed through compulsory compassion.




A distraction.


And one fraction of passion arouses reaction,

while the thought of extraction contrives satisfaction


The power expelled from just one interaction.



© 2017 revalatia



Author's Note

revalatia
It gets away from me quickly...just as he does.

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Loved the alliteration. Nicely done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


the alliteration is perfect. the poem is very relatable and the emotion is very well expressed.
great read

Posted 1 Year Ago


revalatia

1 Year Ago

thank you for you reviews! I appreciate it!
DarkMist

1 Year Ago

You're welcome
Very nice use of words and thoughts. Gain and lost.The game board of life. I enjoyed this poem. You made the reader think. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on April 26, 2017
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revalatia
revalatia

Azusa, CA



About
Thoughts in motion..words spiraling inside me.. more to come.................................later....In the meantime.. My own moment of clarity.. was realizing repeating the same mistakes over and ov.. more..

Writing
Beeware.. Beeware..

A Poem by revalatia