May this feeling never die..

May this feeling never die..

A Poem by revalatia

A love that lust defined


Do you believe, my mind conceives

the thought of you and I?

To hold you close, an overdose

As if your touch, a high.

It sounds absurd when put in words,

no matter how I try.

I feel as though, we've met before,

although I know not why.

In this, please trust, it's more than lust

In truth, I cannot lie.

Within your grin, I spin within,

left dizzy from each 'hi'.

If someday you'd say, 'please come and stay'

I'd grow the wings to fly.

I'd cross the blue and swim to you,

to prove you are the guy.

To let you go, would hurt me so,

the thought just makes me sigh,

I hope you know, your love alone

would make me want to cry,

So much in fact, I won't retract

I would not say goodbye.

© 2017 revalatia

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An honest thought from someone that's honestly in love. If only the other felt the same.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

...Exactly. Thank you for reviewing!
A poem that reads like a story - one of my favorites - also the one very difficult to write.
but this is absolutely beautiful - really loved it

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Posted 1 Year Ago

Way! To! Go! Absolutely fabulous in imagery, story, and musicality! Fan-tas-tic! Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago

I love the way you write, in both the language and the way you phrase your sentences! You are a very talented writer, love this :)

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A hopeful poem for love.
"If someday you'd say, 'please come and stay'
I'd grow the wings to fly.
I'd cross the blue and swim to you,
to prove you are the guy."
I liked the above lines.
When the heart is set. The heart will wait. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.

Posted 1 Year Ago

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6 Reviews
Added on May 3, 2017
Last Updated on May 3, 2017



Azusa, CA

Thoughts in motion..words spiraling inside me.. more to come.................................later....In the meantime.. My own moment of clarity.. was realizing repeating the same mistakes over and ov.. more..

Beeware.. Beeware..

A Poem by revalatia

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