Endeavors of Never

Endeavors of Never

A Poem by revalatia
"

something short

"
I will always remember our moments together.
pretending to sever what time hadn't measured.
Left clinging to feelings, by which I'm still tethered.... Binding me, blinded ---

to endeavors of never.  

pretending once more, that some distance is better
My passion left dried up
....my sorrow much wetter

but your presence, still treasured 
though it is weathered, whatever.

...... reminds me, that sometimes, 
first times
Last Forever.



© 2017 revalatia



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Very touching. I can sense this is something special to you when you wrote it.well done

Posted 1 Month Ago


Exactly what my self says every time I remember those days. Beautiful.

Posted 1 Month Ago


beautifully and deeply said. clever.
"first times
Last Forever."
experiences & memories are forever regardless of how things turn out. they take their place in who we are. we all have regrets; part of life. matters of the heart always difficult but that is where the good stuff lives nonetheless...


Posted 1 Month Ago


revalatia

1 Month Ago

thank you very much :)
I agree dear Poet.
"...... reminds me, that sometimes,
first times
Last Forever."
First love and first kiss. First words of love. Never forgotten. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


I have no words. .....my voice is in my awe!! Well freaking done!!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sounds like a contemplation of past mistakes and present regrets. They do cling as long as they are allowed to. They don't have to last forever.

Posted 3 Months Ago


revalatia

2 Months Ago

Right you are.. ...thank you for reviewing

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Added on November 25, 2017
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revalatia
revalatia

Azusa, CA



About
Thoughts in motion..words spiraling inside me.. more to come.................................later....In the meantime.. My own moment of clarity.. was realizing repeating the same mistakes over and ov.. more..

Writing
Beeware.. Beeware..

A Poem by revalatia



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