Beeware..

Beeware..

A Poem by revalatia

Is there no one alive 
who survived from my hive?

I wait here deprived 
for my kind to arrive.

It seems that these reapers,
disguised as beekeepers

have poisoned the comb,
which I once called a home

contained and enslaved, as we're making the honey
that fatten man's wallet, when traded for money.

The factory vanished, our workers unseen
no buzzing about, not a sign of our queen

Alarm has begun, the plot's gotten much deeper
why relocate the colony, when a pesticide's cheaper?

© 2018 revalatia



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I love the writing of this. It is different to all the other works we read on here, and it is refreshing to have something like this. There is a very real message hidden in these words, our treatment of bees just to obtain their produce of honey. I also love the pun in the title! Great job!

Posted 1 Day Ago


I always appreciate a poem that artfully sticks to it's theme.

It's very easy to be either one dimensional with blinders on or to be aimless, too inclusive and contradictory because of it. I think you have avoided those things quite nicely with this one.


Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Alone in the comb. Would be bad place to be. You told a story in the poem.
"contained and enslaved, as we're making the honey
that fatten man's wallet, when traded for money."
Money left the comb empty and I liked the question at the end. Thank you Revalatia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


deep message, dude. keen observation on what's going on in our society.

Posted 1 Month Ago


this is an amazingly crafted bit of absurdity (if you don't mind such categorization). It paints a sufficient picture that allows for interpretation, and the ending has a weird twist of humour. Well done!

Posted 1 Month Ago



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revalatia
revalatia

Azusa, CA



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Thoughts in motion..words spiraling inside me.. more to come.................................later....In the meantime.. My own moment of clarity.. was realizing repeating the same mistakes over and ov.. more..

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