Vertigo

He carved her name

Into his wrist

And hoped that God

Could end all this

 

He walked up to the tower

With her in his heart

To say one last goodby

 

They went together

To the roof of the

Gothic tower

And stared into

Darkness set below

 

He carved her name

Into his wrist

Hoping he could end all this

He jumped into abyss

Author's Note

Tell me what you think. What needs improvement, etc. Forget the spelling and grammar, I know. I cant type very well.

Reviews

[Krazy On The Outside]

I love it!
It'a a really amazing poem!

[Tori]

Awesomeness!!! I loved the "He carved her name into his wrist" That was justs pure genius!!! GO BLAKE! GO BLAKE!!! No but great job! I look forward to reading more of your stuff!! Keeep it up!!

[Holly]

Wow.. That was...terribly depressing for the most part. Very well written, yes, but still.... depressing.