Queen of Hearts

*cough cough*

QUEEN OF HEARTS

My crimson Queen of Hearts

Cheeks red like cherry

Hair of woven ebony

Those lips of devil-red

My heart has surely bled

She sits upon that scarlet throne

Hear voiceless rose’s longful moans

She has my heart of bleeding crimson

My woven cardinal heartstrings such want has them undone

That red lust which burns within me

The sight of such a beauty, my body begins to plea

My crimson Queen of Hearts

My heart burns red for thee

My crimson Queen of Hearts

My heart burns red for thee

Author's Note

It got messed up sort of. There was a line going through, just ignore it if it's there...

Reviews

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

Really good poem : )

I just hate that every time i come to your profile all your f*****g music turns on at once- especially when i'm trying to listen to elvis-but wWAiitTT!!! i HAve to turn off MICHael JAcksON first- because he's trying to sing thriller-and then die romantic it about to make me DIEEee but the barbie song is classic and i've loved it since i was little..

oh- sorry- baack to the poem- niceee

high five! *in a borat voice with the mustache and all*

[cheeeeese]

You really described everything perfectly. Also, the color and font that you used was perfect for this piece. Great job

[Tori]

hahahahahaahahahahahahahahaahahahaaaaaa...that was definetey bout Holly.......Good though! Very good! Great descriptions! Are you her "Crimson King?" hahaha....thats sweet. Good though!!! Very good!!

[ebur™]

that was such a great poem! such imagination too, and the description was well executed. two thumbs up. :)

[Holly]

Wow. That was beautiful Blake. I loved it. Would you think me conceded if I asked if I was the inspiration of this? It was awesome either way. Great job!