Atomic Boy Vs The Mechanical Bride

Beware the giants

Tyrants 

Robbing your memories

in your dreams

Who are we to preserve

the  location where we sleep?

So we speak, take my tongue out

wrap it around your sofa

Tied me to your bed

as I wake up good as

dead

Affairs of a traumatized mind

due to time

Which efficiency?

you or me? is the cause

right for the night

As we dine in the depths

of your life well spent

As you live like a god

and you have my consent

Chastise from paranoia

scolded from the known

Echos on the airwaves

as blood flows down my pathway

As I drove my car

oh so far

My gas tank blows

as I die in smoke

Blown away

the sky's ablaze

my eyes in a haze

As what became 

I saw

I fear of jealousy

as I died in the jaws

from a monster named 

lechery

Reviews

[Tempeste Mavys]

You have such a deep way with words, it really makes you think of the meaning behind every line! Good job.

[Cahjli Symes]

thank you:)

[joshua deathdealer]

This is brilliant to me. The messages played very subtle in my mind. Very deep and nicely formatted. Pierce by Veil rocks btw haha. But yea I really enjoyed this poem. Take care.

[Cahjli Symes]

Thanks lol in all honesty its about a one night stand XD

[joshua deathdealer]

Ha they usually give the best of inspiration. lol Nice.

[Cahjli Symes]

lol thanks, now i know

[Matching Socks]

The mechanical bride...
Interesting. You come up with some very unique stuff.
I'm a fan.

[Cahjli Symes]

lol i never had a fan before XD

[Cahjli Symes]

the title is a homage to a song by pierce the veil

[Matching Socks]

You young ppl and your rock n roll...
Does nobody listen to Trent Reznor anymore?

[Cahjli Symes]

well i do. havent heard anything from him since the girl with the dragon tattoo soundtrack and 90's NIN

[Cahjli Symes]

90's kid ftw!!!! :D

[Matching Socks]

:) 90's was good for music. Nirvana, pearl jam...

[Cahjli Symes]

radiohead,blur,soundgarden,nofx,portishead etc etc

[Matching Socks]

Yeah! Etc

[Cahjli Symes]

etc great band